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[Search] Harry Potter and the Questionable Spandex

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Jon, Apr 24, 2014.

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  1. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    Apr 28, 2014 #21
    Don't bother reading Harry Potter goes to Smallville. It's... really badly written.

    Oh, the technical writing is good, but everything else, such as plot, pacing, and (most significantly) the characterization? Terrible.
     
  2. bob99

    bob99 High Inquisitor

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    Apr 29, 2014 #22
    I've skimmed through parts of a few of his other stories. I think that is a problem with all of them.
     
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