thought it was ridiculously good and it has to be one of my favorite active stories at the time. your also one of the only smut writers i can read, along with big D.

i would also like to point that harry potter has had more sex with more girls, at the same time, than any man on earth, fictional or not. except maybe hugh hephner god bless his good good soul

 

*wags finger at PI*... no double posting... edit previous post if necessary

 

Thanks. Yeah, Big D's good, if only he would post more of his stuff.

Not sure I follow, though I don't think I'll dispute that claim after reading parts of Horus go home.

 

I'll watch it, decent plot if not very smutty, but you can skip the smut and not loose anything. As long as it doesn't become Harry having to have ritual sex with tons of girls at once, I will enjoy the story

 

I could do that but then I lose kind of the point. Though if there is ever massive sex ritual orgies, I would summarize them instead of writing em.

 

is horus go home an HP story? and if it is is it any good? and if it is can i get a link please?

 

sometimes it's just same.

 

just finshed reading the story, and I must say that it`s better than I expected it to be.
It has the potetial to be good. if the author does not concetrate to much on harry getting a harem.

waiting for more chapters :| to see where the story is headed so give a good opinion.

 

I've loved the story since the first chap though im a little confused of why in the graveyard he decided to use dark curses.

But other then that one of my favorite stories especially since hes going Dark :twisted:

 

It was posted at adultfanfiction.net, but they're having some problems right now.

The Harry Potter Extreme Yahoo Group (http://groups.yahoo.com/group/harrypotterxtreme/?yguid=231798528) is the only other place that I know it is posted at.

 

Horus Go Home is not that good at all. Just pure porn with fairly cheesy/crappy/badly laid out plot and almost unreadable writing at times... but whatever.

I'm glad you liked the story so far. If it makes you feel better, think of the girls as being Harry's potential lieutenants. Not all will be frontline troops, but expect any who I keep with Harry to be able to hold their own. Actual fights are also coming up...as soon as I get my bearings. I have been away this week for conference and got a few tests earlier next week.

 

right, ill stay away from that then

 

props to the author. i hate slash fics so this is the only male harry veela story i have read and i say it is really good though the writing quality could be a bit better. i know i cant write a veela fic myself so like i said props to the author

 

Ok...the reduced ch. 11 is up. I'll say up front that this is probably the crappiest chapter I wrote thus far for this story. Very uninspired and took a whole lot of time. I know, 9, 10, 11 kind of seem pointless. At least now, I'm pretty sure there's nothing else except the actual action scenes...

Mrriddler

 

I don't think that the chapter was that bad, I thought it was well done really. The Veela city's description was very good and I liked the way Harry went off on Fleur. Although, I was a little confused at one part...

Red cloaks?

 

Well its been a while since you last posted so i expect that you've shakin your rust off now and going to go back to kickin ass like you have done in the previous chappies? I think that it was good but then it was probably just as bad, more boring and slightly confusing in the character interaction and how your working the power plays. *shrugs* i enjoy your story and cant wait for more...

 

That's better than I expected then. I usually tried to write a chapter around some central issue but couldn't really find one here. Description for the veela city was last minute addition and I just copied words used to describe the archetecture of the baroque period.

Kind of why I lumped it together then, since I suspected this might happen.

Lavender was just the name I pulled from the hat. There is no way, I could have canonically written her role under any other Hogwarts student anyway so I thought I might as well pick arguably one of the most distainful characters.

I thought the DE wore red cloaks...eh, but couldn't find anything on it in hp-lexicon so I removed that part.

 

hello everyone.... chapter 11 is good but I was lookin forward to having him stabed in this one or is he going to find out whats going on before the action?
Either way I hope you are planning on having that Duchess deNoire bitch tortured before killed. I really don't like the idea of a man being the slave veela females or not.

 

I'm happy to see an update to the story yet as far as this chapter goes, I'm on the fence about it. It wasn't bad yet i don't think that it was really all that good either.