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Abandoned Secret of the Male Veela by mrriddler - R/NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by ip82, Dec 28, 2005.

  1. Vascudo

    Vascudo First Year

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    Among my top 20 HP fics of all time,and this one helped me get over the horror that was the Half-Blood Prince,urgh!:wall:
     
  2. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    hey riddler any idea when you are going to have the fic journey back to the land known as hogwarts
     
  3. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Have to do some stuff with Voldemort, Dumbledore, and maybe ministry and some other people as well have Harry come up with a game plan for the school year. Then it will be off to Hogwarts.

    I haven't forgotten, but my chapters have a habit of growing by themselves. I think I'm getting better at trimming them though.
     
  4. Nexus

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    I dont think anybody wants you to trim the "interesting" stuff but yeah isn't it about time that he returned to Hogwarts?
     
  5. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    ...Why should he return to Hogwards? I know you can work it without Hogwarts. Oh and Update now!!!:)
     
  6. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Probably, but some things fit better while others things however interesting don't.

    He don't, but then the story loses a lot of the HP feel and possibly many interesting scenes I could write. I'm hoping that Harry's fifth year would be much more interesting than OotP.

    Plus, there's a realistic reason (plotwise). The possibility of transfering to Beauxbatons is now out as Harry would be much more adverse to staying in France than to stay at Hogwarts. And going elsewhere would be comparable to making a blind jump into the unknown. Strategically speaking, Harry's best choice would be to force concessions out of Dumbledore and extend his influence at home. Next chapter, which I have already sent to my betas, will cover a part of this.
     
  7. Nexus

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    Well even though we don't like canon. Without Hogwarts you might as well be writing a completely different story rather than Harry Potter. Besides he doesn't have to return as a student.
     
  8. Cell

    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    What else can he return as? A Professor,ground keeper,advisor of some sort? He's returning as a fifth year student.

    I would gladly like Harry to return to Hogwarts as a student and claim all those beautiful girls for his Harem and have them do his dirty works,while Harry deals with Dumbles,Ministry, and Voldemort.
     
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  9. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    Great chap Riddler. LMAO on the Gabrielle inquisition.

    EDIT: Outstanding.
     
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  11. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    I cannot stress enough how eagerly I look forward to Harry's first detention with Umbridge. He should impale her with that Blood Quill.

    I also hope fervently that Harry does not meet Fleur's expectations of not falling into demon-hood.
     
  12. IndoGhost

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    I'm speechless...The begaining completely caught me off gaurd for some reason. Gabrielle words were a "I did not just read that" moment for some odd reason. And I Have to say this was a good chapter for moving the plot.
     
  13. Nexus

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    Harry is always "unique" so i hope he doesn't become like the rest of his ancestors and become demonic.

    rofl.....for the bit about Gabrielle.
     
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  14. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    LEWL at the school. that was a very interesting little beggining there which made me chuckle. very good chapter plotwise. i also like the fact that herry is going back to hogwarts, as he really does have to begin extending his harem at some point, doesnt he?
     
  15. madengineer

    madengineer Muggle

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    hey ppl.

    Love this fic.

    Been 2 months now :( update?
     
  16. Lucas13

    Lucas13 Second Year

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    thats necrofily you know...
    you cant bump a 2 months old Thread unless youre gonna say somehing important...
     
  17. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    You can bump any topic in Library as long it is very important. So, yes his is still wrong, but if he said more it 'd be okay.

    Does anyone know what happened to Mrriddler?
     
  18. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Lucas: Its necrophelia.

    Madengineer: Only bump threads in the library if you have anything important to say. Not "ZOMG! 3y3 LKI3 THI5!! UPDATE!!111oneoneone!!
     
  19. Moloch

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    o_O

    I thought I saw Riddler aorund the forums, just thought he was a slow updater.

    And plus; isn't Necrophelia supposed to be sex with the dead?
     
  20. Charun

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    Yes it is. Some people realy like dead things :p