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Seventh Month's Child

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Dungbomb, Sep 27, 2017.

2/5, 2 votes
  1. Dungbomb

    Dungbomb First Year

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    Sep 27, 2017 #1
    Title: Seventh Month's Child
    Author: AngelMorph
    Rating: K
    Genre: Angst
    Status: WIP
    Library Category: The Alternatives
    Pairings: None
    Summary: Two centuries after canon, a Dark Lord rules the world and one lonely mother awaits a child born in the seventh month. Years later a second child is born.

    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1713286/1/Seventh-Month-s-Child

    This story started as a one-shot that turned into a two but leaves the ending totally open. Very interesting idea for a not so bright future.
     
  2. Halt

    Halt 1/3 of the Note Bros. Moderator

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    Sep 27, 2017 #2
    An interesting idea but sadly needs more words to do it justice. As it is, it's just questionable as it butchers Harry's character and places him at the head of a fairly stereotypical evil apocalyptic society. 2/5.
     
  3. TallDarkStranger

    TallDarkStranger Fourth Year

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    Sep 27, 2017 #3
    Yes, as Halt says, interesting, but what I think stories like this need are a narrative.
    Harry's a Dark Lord.
    Why?
    Without that, this is just OC Dark Lord and new Harry reborn under different circumstances.
    That said, ideas were nice, like the Power He Knows Not being that the Kid is magical. Promising, but just sizzle for now.
     
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