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Complete Shadows of Konoha - Amora Journeys - M - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by bonnerr2, Dec 5, 2011.

  1. LT2000

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    In the context of this particular story? It would have been better if Nagato had won and then left everyone out of their endless misery.
     
  2. ShaneDude

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    If anyone still follows this story there's been a two chapter update. Major plot twist too, unlike anything I've seen in fanfiction.
    Naruto forcefully becomes Hokage and recalls all his ninja from the warfronts. He then proceeds to go to Kiri by himself and surrenders to the Mizukage Suigetsu.
     
  3. Darth Disaster

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    That's effing terrible. Effing. Terrible. 2.5/5 because the story has nothing that makes you want to read it unless you're a total masochist.
     
  4. TheWiseTomato

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    I choose to believe this is part of some gambit or another. I cannot see Suigetsu accepting this surrender and therefore 'letting' Naruto off.

    For the story to end in the ignoble surrender of the main character...nah, fuck that.
     
  5. Lion

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    Yea, there's gonna be some type of fight. Suigetsu wants to beat Naruto too much for that to just by pass.
     
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