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Oneshot Skin Deep by Smileyfax - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by potterheadcharles, Feb 14, 2015.

  1. potterheadcharles

    potterheadcharles Third Year

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    Title: Skin Deep
    Author: Smileyfax
    Rating: T
    Genre: Romance/Parody
    Status: Oneshot
    Library Category: Romance
    Pairings: Harry/Tonks
    Summary:On their wedding night, Harry asks Tonks to reveal her true face. Romance abounds!
    FanFiction.Net

    I just cannot express the feelings this marvelous piece of art brought to my heart in mere words. I have read this five or six times in the past couple years and the awesome quality of this fic still leaves me spellbound.

    Please, On this Valentine's Day, this is the best description of 'tru' love I could find.

    Just read this once. Its very short. Its lovely.

    6/5 FROM ME. AWESOME.
     
  2. noura62442

    noura62442 First Year

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    This is up there on the most idiotic shit I've ever read. 1/5 would give it a lot fucking less if I could.
     
  3. Hachi

    Hachi Death Eater

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    Should be categorized as parody. It made me chuckle.

    3/5
     
  4. Stan

    Stan Order Member

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    This idea could have been much so much more effective had it been written by a competent author.

    As it is - 2/5.
     
  5. Scott

    Scott Professor DLP Supporter

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    Yeah I'd give it a 2/5. Made me chuckle is the only reason it gets that.
     
  6. Averis

    Averis Don of Delivery ~ Prestige ~

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    5/5 if nonjon wrote it.

    2/5 for the effort. I've seen much better, funnier things in our 'TGYH' threads
     
  7. Newcomb

    Newcomb Minister of Magic

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    Yeah, this seems like something you'd see as an impromptu scribble on IRC. If you're going to put what amounts to a single joke in the library, it had better be absolute perfection - this isn't.

    1/5
     
  8. Shinysavage

    Shinysavage Madman With A Box ~ Prestige ~

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    Well. It's better than I thought, in that it's essentially technically competent as far as a quick read revealed. The joke is barely worthy of the name though. It's the sort of gag Nonjon might have tossed in as a one-liner, spread over 600ish words. Really?

    Not library worthy at all.
     
  9. Charlesnaismith

    Charlesnaismith First Year

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    I though it was amusing. Frankly, I have read just about the entire library and I need to find more fanfiction. If you don't like one-shots you can filter them out.

    4/5 on the oneshot scale.
     
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