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Smile By Kyrissean Angelis - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Stalicon, Dec 9, 2005.

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  1. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Feb 16, 2008 #21
    Which is perfectly fine, because no one gives a fuck about her opinion.

    May the new author carry on.
     
  2. Voice of the Nephilim

    Voice of the Nephilim Death Eater DLP Supporter

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    Feb 16, 2008 #22
    Unless of course his sister keeps him in a closet with a laptop computer, betas his work and uses Crucio when it is not up to her standards.
     
  3. fash

    fash Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Feb 17, 2008 #23
    someone wouldn't happen to have this save on their computer would they? sounds interesting. and something to when bored at work :)
     
  4. Warlocke

    Warlocke Fourth Champion

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    Feb 17, 2008 #24
    Smile and Betrayed should both be in the DLP Archive.

    I don't know if all the chapters that were ever posted are in the archive, but someone around here might have the rest if not.

    Edit: Shit, I might have it, for that matter, but my HP fic folder has over 93,000 files in it, so finding any copy I might have other than the one from the DLP Archive would take a while.
     
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  5. fash

    fash Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Feb 17, 2008 #25
    ah ty, totally forgot about the DLP Archive lol. thanks for that
     
  6. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    Feb 18, 2008 #26
    From the looks of it the archive has only 23k words of this story. Me wants all 300k.
    EDIT: Does it get better? The first chapter is rushed and cliched.
     
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  7. Zield

    Zield Fourth Year

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    Feb 18, 2008 #27
    I think the first chapter is all that was every posted anywhere.
     
  8. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    Feb 18, 2008 #28
    Really? Where did I read about 300k?... Hmm, guess this is one of my retard moments.
     
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  9. Zield

    Zield Fourth Year

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    No that wasn't a stupidity moment you read 300k written in the post that said Kryissean was dead and the additional 300k he wrote would not be posted because his sister didn't want it.
     
  10. fash

    fash Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Feb 18, 2008 #30
    someone should kill that bitchy sister....




    j/ks
     
  11. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    May 17, 2010 #31
    This is a very generic and rushed Super!Harry bash-fest. Dumbledore is pretty badly characterised at points, but at other times he seems slightly tolerable. The romance with Tonks sucked balls, and the attempted redcon on Harry's character was quite shoddy.

    I could probably be more lenient, but the story will never reach what potential it had, and Harry's character really got on my nerves.

    1/5
     
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