Great chapter. I love the Dark Lord Central idea.
Please don't make him any weeker by Homone's comments.
She can't be that smart, she's not a people-person but an unsocial bookworm with a very theoretical view on how people work. She didnt have any friends in primary school. I like the way you made Boot sarcastic. Keep it up!

 

If you put a couple of zeroes before the chapter number like this: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3003214/0011/ it will load fine.

Back on topic: My favorite part was the last scene “these are definitely Melinda’s.” heeheehee

 

Is anyone else getting pissed off by Hermione? I dont know, she just really pisses me off in this; even though it is a parody.

 

Why does Hermione piss you off? Is it like a definite thing you can pinpoint or is it just a gut feeling?

 

A gut feeling, and a little of her arrogance and need to show-off everything she knows. I don't know why, but I do know I am angered by her.

Maybe it's because she's in-canon and she pisses me off in canon too. I guess it's a compliment to you. Heh.

 

*grins* okay, I was worried I wasn't doing something right with her, but I was trying to make her as stuck up as she was in canon...she'll mellow out in a few chapters...maybe...we'll see *grins*

 

Great chapter. The Cult of Ravenclaw.... I bust out laughing at that. Great idea. I also like how you wrote Boot and Hormone. Keep it up.

ROFL

 

Very good chapter, And I don't seem to mind Hermione as much as I usually do.

LOL, yess evil smart comfortable people.

 

Discovered this not too long ago before coming here and it is an excellent fic. Love the sarcasm. Well if the past 6 pages dont convince you to read, doubt this will to

 

Absolutely hilarious. It'll be very interesting to see how Harry handles lessons. The Cult of Ravenclaw - LOL. It always seems to be the Slytherins... A welcome change.

 

this is one of the best fics that i've read recently, along with that 'bungle in the jungle' one..


nice characterization! very in-canon hermione and fucking hilarious 11 year old!


i wish you the best of luck on the rest of this story, as it has been top-notch so far, lunakatrina.

 

Yes!

Finally figured out the problem with stupid FF.net!
Great Chapter indeed Luna- I loved the Viagra comment. So true.
Can't wait for the next chappie. Keep it up.

 

love this chapter, i personally found this to be one of the funniest chapters.

 

I thought it would be hard to top the "frogs on the train", but no you go and kick it up a notch, exitable elves, melinda's panties. Please don't forget to set up Prof. Sprout, ah havoc in the greenhouse...

Mashed potatoes, to much joy...

 

New chapter just came out, it's very short but not bad. It's all about him wanting a new mattress for his bed, because the nasty was done on it. lol, Harry is so funny.

 

Lol yea, short chapter but funny. Especially the "Golden Sheen", I enjoyed that. Short good chapter, not much to say otherwise.

 

I can tell you don't read author's notes, allow me to quote it to you:

So, I'm protected from this accusation...and might I add there are a lot of brit-pickers out there that don't read author's notes...

so...umm...yeah...

*clears throat*

...*points and laughs*

 

It was good for a light-hearted read. The parts with the bedding, and the reoccuring House-Elf part were great, but I didn't really get the "mediocre soccer players" line. Maybe I need to listen to the song? Anyways, twas an amusing read, and I hope that you update rather soon.