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Abandoned Something Unforgivable by Bleedndreamz - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Roma, May 1, 2011.

  1. Starwind

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    I mainly read it because the writer has a Naruto fic I have enjoyed quite a bit compared to most others.

    I liked the whole bit with Cedric not telling Harry, we've seen what Amos is like, so I see it being in Cedric's nature to be occasionally selfish if pushed enough.

    Although the fact that Fleur looked ashamed? I'm iffy as that shows the writer might try to do Harry x Fleur x Daphne, because if anyone would look ashamed I think it would be Cedric, Fleur was haughty around him at that point and wouldn't think he was worth it, and Viktor is a Quiditch player and takes all the advantages he can get, well imo anyways.

    It seems a little rushed with Daphne, but the all-knowing-Daphne is what has me iffy at the moment.
     
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