No!

It started as a average fic and just got downhill from there... Its like the author( thats probably a she) is writing the fic taking all the reviews she receives and puting it together to do the chapters.

About grammar I cant really say much because english is not my main language so I do a lot of mistakes too.

Anyway this fic is just not worth the time.

 

The plot and idea behind it had potential. I loved the technomancy and space travel. I could even handle the slash, but the fic itself sucked ass.

It was preachy, in direct opposition to the rules of grammar, and written entirely too fast. I like quick updates don't get me wrong but the whole story was written in under two months. He could have stretched that out and used a spell checker.

 

I read it about two months ago and made it to the part where Harry flies to space. I stopped there, and haven't picked it up since. The story seems to rely on "Muggle/SciFi" things rather than Magic.

 

I rather enjoyed it, actually. Yes, there were a fair amount of errors, but I found it interesting. For those who don't know, UNIT is from Doctor Who. (Actually, maybe that's why I enjoyed it so much - I'm a big Doctor Who fan.) It did have some amusing bits in it, too, and some great lines.