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Abandoned Stained Future by Master Slytherin - T

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Master Slytherin, Aug 20, 2006.

  1. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Hahaha! If only you knew...

    Listen people. Make sweeping judgments only when you've read a substantial amount of the fic. Tell me this prologue's shit as if you want, but please don't condemn the whole fic because of what you think might happen...condemn it when you know what happens. :)

    Thanks for all the reviews. Nesxt chapter will hopefully be out this time tomorrow (after Godfather on FilmFour for those in England - yes I'm watching it again :p)
     
  2. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Yes Master Slytherin the prologue is good.

    Yes to who ever said Knowledge is important. And to whoever said that you could only learn so much. I seem to remember Dumbledore or Tom Riddle saying(think this is canon but if not my mistake) that Tom Riddle pushed the boundaries of magic farther than just about anyone. You can always learn more.

    Tom's journey? Yes he travelled, he planned, he gained followers. But he also learned. Britan is not the only place in the world with magic. Rome, Greece, the Middle East, those places would have had tons of ancient and probably new magic as they were around far before Merlin or the Founders. He gained experience, skill, and most of all knowledge on his trip around the world. Hogwarts couldnt teach Tom to be able to outduel Dumbledore. Dumbledore I imagine would have done much the say as Tom did.

    Tom has all he needs to win experience, skill, talent, magical power, and tons of knowledge. But he has to beat Harry which isnt exactly going in his favor.

    Harry( as I see him) has talent, and power. Skill comes with experience. Knowledge comes with trying to learn. He wasted his time with Ron in his howgwarts years.
     
  3. Master Slytherin

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    Evil Shnitzel High Inquisitor

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    Excellent chapter. I really interested to know how the ministry framed Dumbledore. Eagerly awaiting the next one.
     
  5. sirius009

    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    Interesting. As for my review. It was the perfect place for this chapter. It keeps us guessing about the prologue while giving us even more information on the current wizarding world, then the chapter ends and we want to read more about the current world, find out the identity of Mick, etc..
    Keep up the good work and update soon..
     
  6. Myst

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    I still cant give this fic a rating... but thats mostly because I'm confused and quite honestly annoyed at not knowing anything.

    otherwise good update..
     
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    Good update though i would like to know how they managed to actully cature Dumbledore rather than frame him.
     
  8. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Well then you'll have to be patient. Patience is a virtue...

    And I would like to know why Burger King insists on putting onions into their Whoppers. I guess we all have something we'd like to know.

    Thanks for the reviews.
     
  9. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    I recognised that chapter from somewhere, was it posted on your group in the files section or something.

    It was good anyway.
     
  10. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    A part of it was posted on my groupages ago, yes. That could explain the practically non-existent response.
     
  11. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Sorry but yeah I read it in your group. UPDATE SOON PLEASE i wanna rate the story. But Ima wait for more chapters.
     
  12. se7en

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    I liked the latest chapter. This made me want to read more :)
     
  13. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    I thought that it was extremely interesting. KreacherSpeak!Dumbledore was hilarious, IMO. You've built a lot of suspense for only having two chapters out, so I hope that you can keep it up and update soon!
     
  14. Ragon

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    Emphasis on the update soon! part
     
  15. Olfrik

    Olfrik Seventh Year

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    I liked your Dumbledore very much, you definitely have me hooked now.
     
  16. Master Slytherin

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    Great chapter. I was a little suprised that his home life wasn't as spectacular as usual, but I suppose, I can't expect to be able to prodict what is coming in your stories. Now that the story is starting to progress, I am really loving it.
     
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    I like that you break the typical stereotypes of the loving familiy and the wise mentor here in an original way. Good chapter!
     
  19. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    i think the next chapter is up, read it on ffn...

    seems like harry has hard a tought time raising his son...like the monkey nob though.
     
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    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    good chapter, gave great background detail and character description, it also let us know a little bit about harrys life. One question though, is Sirius' hair Auburn or Blonde?
     
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