Title: Stalking Harry Potter
Author: empathapathique
Rating: T
Genre: Romance/Drama
Status: Completed
Library Category: Romance
Pairings: Harry/Pansy P.
Summary: Summary: Pansy told herself to act natural, but she couldn't quite remember how she naturally acted around Harry Potter. She certainly wasn't nice to him, but she didn't think it exactly fit to glare at him when he hadn't done anything wrong yet. Shameless PPHP.

Since I have terrible track record for terrible written romance fics, even if they are enjoyable, this is one of the best written Harry/Pancy fics out there.

Then keep in mind to add the pairing as a tag. -- Sesc
And - even more important - the author. -- Minion

 

Just lol at the amount of time spent describing Harry buying underwear.

 

It gets better, really fast.

And by better, I mean more retarded. But I laughed so hard.

 

For some reason I really like this. The writing is decent, and while the hyperbole gets a bit out of control, it's a step out of line with the normal gaggingly fluffy shipping pieces. I was engrossed enough that I didn't even notice the end coming, and actually felt a pang of regret when it arrived. 4/5.

 

:facepalm
What happened to my DLP? Where's the action, the drama, the mystery?
Seems like the only decent new stories are the contest entries and HP/DF crossovers. We need sustenance.

 

Fixed that for you, cause thats what friends are for. D:

 

A long-winded, repetitive, babbling soap opera filled with unresolved sexual tension. I suppose that's pretty normal for any purely romance story. Some force that I cannot explain kept me reading it, and I'm happy that I'm finally through. Meh. The story is told from Pansy's POV, and she is as insecure, girly, and totally smitten as they go.

Plot-wise, there are no real complications (beyond circumstance) that kept them from proclaiming their eternal everlasting Love to each other. A number of AU deviations from canon are mentioned, and they're interesting. The author said that she has three beta-readers, but it's still riddled with small lexical errors. Beyond that, I didn't detect any grammatical, punctuational, or stylistic problems.

Overall, it's an o'kay shallow romance story that I wish were shorter. 3/5