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Complete Stronger Than Hope by Alaunatar - M

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Styx, Mar 22, 2007.

  1. The_Banisher

    The_Banisher First Year

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    I have enjoyed thus far and am hoping for either an epilogue or a sequel. 4.5/5.
     
  2. Promios

    Promios Fourth Year

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    I thought this was great. Strongly recommended, 5/5.
     
  3. ender839

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    I'm also quite happy with this story and must commend it for mostly-proper grammar. I particularly enjoyed a slightly different Rufus; he brings a more enjoyable method to the manipulation.

    4.8/5
     
  4. KenderCleric

    KenderCleric Lord of Plot Bunnies

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    I was tempted to not even bother with this fic after seeing the Guardian!Snape. However, feeling the need to punish myself for some reason I read it anyway.

    1. The plot is unoriginal and uninspired - 2/5
    2. Snape doesn't die horribly - 1/5
    3. Harry is an idiot and emo - 1/5
    4. Harry learns uber-skills in under a year - 1/5

    I stick by my judgemental attitude that Guardian!Snape fics will always leave a desire for violence in the reader.

    1.5/5
     
  5. Devils

    Devils Muggle

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    I just finished this story and I am so grateful for having read it! It was a long story but well worth the time. I loved the unique relationship that Severus and Harry shared and it was interesting that Rufus Scrimgeour played such an important part in the story. He tends to be an underused character in fanfiction.
     
  6. Deltox

    Deltox Banned

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    I gotta say, I actually like this. Really, I'm surprised how well this is written. Sure, the angst is a bit heavy at the start, but a lot of fics in general start out weird without knowing what they want to be. The author deserves props tho, daily updates isn't easy to maintain, and they take feedback really well. All in all, apart from the beginning (which is a 3/5), I'd give this 4.5/5 overall easy.
     
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