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Subject: If I could only be... by just dont tell my mum - k+

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Xanos, Jan 14, 2006.

  1. Xanos

    Xanos Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Title:If I could only be normal
    Author: just dont tell my mum
    Rating: k+Genre: [Genre]
    Pairing:N/A
    Status:WiP
    Summary: On his sixteenth birthday harry gets new powers, unfortunately the wizards of his age cant cope with his powers so he gets sent back to people who can help his rather unique case prehbp

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1920477/1/
     
  2. That_Boy

    That_Boy DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    I didn't like this at all when i read it. It was uber half demon, half elf, half vampire etc... Harry. Draco is good and I thought it was quite weak plot wise.
     
  3. radioactive

    radioactive Third Year

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    Yah, I tried reading it, but stopped when I got to...
    I mean, c'mon, this isn't Harry Potter, this is something... well, completely different. Not my cup of tea.
     
  4. DGD

    DGD Headmaster

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    Couldn't get through that whole part with him getting all the Uber!powers.
     
  5. serena

    serena Guest

    Personally I like it a lot. Harry is still himself (up to the point to 'sacrifice' himself so that other could live (not that there is that much risk on this part), and despite all his powers he still is human. Besides, it's a new view of evil!Dumbledore, not that bad for me. Anyway, it is true that it shouldn't be classed in independent harry, but in god like harry, there would perhap's be more appreciations
     
  6. Xanos

    Xanos Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    i dont know it was hard to decide were to put it
     
  7. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    ummmmm...what the hell is an angelic demon? I mean how can a demon be angelic....aren't they demonic the oppsite of angelic...
     
  8. Cervus

    Cervus Raptured to Hell

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    I stumbled across this once and tried to read it. More than anything the image of what Harry must look like had me wondering if he'll ever get laid. Don't know if it's badly written as it was long ago that I read it, I do remember that I didn't like it plot wise and so gave up. Godlike Harry would be a better place to put this fic, although I don't think it would matter where you put it as I don't think the majority of the people at this site would read it. Still, each to their own is what I say.
     
  9. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    WTF is this? seriously what the fuck is wrong with some people? angalic demon? vampire elf? woo i think someone needs to call the men in white coats! i tried reading this, like really tried, but there are somethings that should just be taboo!...But like Cervus said each to thier own.
     
  10. sephiroththebrokenangel

    sephiroththebrokenangel Fourth Year

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    wierd story

    i tried reading this story for a bit but when it got to the point that they said "your father was a vampiric elf and your mother was an angelic demon" i just stopped bothering to try.
     
  11. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    sadly ive ben readin this to see how bad it can get... it gets pretty bad... id lump it together wiht stained future without the lighsabers or horrible english gamer that makes even people who dont speak english cringe...
     
  12. sephiroththebrokenangel

    sephiroththebrokenangel Fourth Year

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    stained future

    i havent read stained future is it really as bad as this one?
     
  13. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I tried to read it... I really did.
     
  14. hubem

    hubem Squib

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    Following your reasoning Harry is, instead of A person, 2 people ...1/2+1/2+1/2+1/2 = 4/2
     
  15. DaytonDeusBlack

    DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year

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    *sigh* What posesses people to write stories like this?
     
  16. nonjon

    nonjon Alumni Retired Staff

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    I think I did read this one a while back. Dad was born from a vampire and an elf. Mom was born from a demon and an angel. I think Snivelly had to bow down to him as Vampire-ness was as like a ruling/king vampire, a royal elf, the special class of angels and demons too.

    It was enjoyable, in a stained-future sort of way.

    But some of these authors really just watch too much anime and write a Harry Potter Anime of sorts. Everyone's a warrior with swords and descendants and they always make the point of the fic something other than Voldemort.

    Meh, there are worse ways to spend your time than read this, but knowing what it is after reading through this thread, you might enjoy it. Though I do recommend stained-future's Master Assassin over this one, if it's a one or the other deal.
     
  17. That_Boy

    That_Boy DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    HEY, don't blame me not my logic blame the crap story
     
  18. Redeye

    Redeye Penultimate Lurker DLP Supporter

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    the story actually explains it that way. they are like "harry is half demon half blah blah blah blah blah" So it really isnt his fault
     
  19. Gullible

    Gullible Headmaster

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    The author has finally decided to put a plot in in the later chapters. What sucks is the plot is also useless. Something like save ginnys soul. May I ask, why? :?
     
  20. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    I read this story quite a while ago. I liked it then, but I haven't been able to get back into it. I just can't.
     
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