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Complete Sunset/Sunrise Over Britain by Bobmin356 - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Giovanni, Aug 7, 2005.

  1. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I say in this FanFic Harry is acting more Slytherin... Well true Slytherin like. Besides why take the chance of screwing it up when you know your revenge will come on its own time?
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    But the thing is, he is like a god in this story. So who gives a flying fuck? lol.

    Thats a huge problem with God-like stories. Why doesnt Harry just go pshyco because he can and just kill everyone that annoys him. He doesnt have to fuck up the entire world, mind. Just have some awesome fun making people squeal like little poncy gits.

    *picture's Harry making Hagrid squeal like a little girl with a selection of Dark Art's spells*

    That's something that would look strange... a half-giant squealling.
     
  3. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    yeah godlike powers but doesn't use them. Of course then again he hasn't learned full control of them yet and no matter how powerful he is, he is still lacking in the experiance/knowledge department in comparison to Dumbledore and Voldemort.
     
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    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    But he could just let the power control him... then no one would even try stop him. Doesnt matter how experianced anyone becomes, if some super high charged bolt of raw magical energy flies at ya, your not gonna be around for long.
     
  5. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    One thing I liked about "Awakening of a Magus" was that, yeah Harry was basically a god like wizard, but he could easily kill himself if he used too much of his power before he learned how to use it.

    That sort of explanation works with this sort of maturity reached Harry, having him sit on his ass and be treated like a punk by RON of all ppl is not worth a damned, lol

    Unfortunatly, in that story, the author chose to play it safe and have Harry be a total inactive bitch, instead of doing anything, lol.

    This really does confuse me though, the two ppl that write this story are talented, its just like this is not their genre to write in or something
     
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    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    It isn't if you read their authors notes :)

    I have a feeling that Harry wont be inactive for to much longer.
     
  7. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    true, but even if he DOES do something finally, him being treated like a sperm recepticle for so many chapters leads a sudden turn in his behavior to be even more unbelievable.

    IMHO, Overall, it's a story to read on a rainy day, nowhere near what these two authors are capable of. At least it's a weird, poorly based parody of the canon characters, who to be honest, suck no matter what you do with them canon based, lol.

    At most? I dunno maybe i'm just so disappointed because I had high hopes for these two authors to write this story in a quality consistent with the other two stories.
     
  8. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Their other two fics? YOU READ HARRY/GINNY STORIES?!?!? You traitor~! But seriously, I steadfastly refuse to read any H/G fic, no matter how incredibly good the rest of it might be. I've probably missed out on several decent stories due to my enormous pairing biases, but whatever. I knows what I likes.
     
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    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    lol :)

    I can't blame you for that stance. I don't read a Harry/Ginny story unless something compels me to... Like me putting off my 36 page essay for my AP MicroEconomics class and having nothing else better to read. Sadly that means I have been reading more and more Harry/Ginny stories as time goes by :(
     
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    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    It was referred to me here somewhere, and I thought it decent enough to read. I don't think it's "great" but the two of them def. have potential to get the fuck away from H/G and instead they went to damned H/Hr.

    I'd like to see then do a decent H/Fem Blaise, or another Jeconais-;ole pairing with Pansy or Daphne
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Harry/Ginny stories always have fucking Ron/Hermione in it and that pairing pisses me off beyond all of them. I just shudder to think what they would look like having a snog.
     
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    Hermione: ron your doing it wrong. your need to touch this not that
    Ron: wicked
    Hermione: you holding me wrong
    Ron: i am not
    they go into a mindless arguement
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    thats how they songgle
     
  13. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Would Hermione even know what Ron's supposed to touch? lol. Oh right, she read it in a book!
     
  14. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    You almost had it, lemee make some adjustments:

    Hermione: ron your doing it wrong. your need to touch this not that I read it in a book

    Ron: Wicked

    Hermione: you holding me wrong, you have to super-extend my neck and trail kisses down my throat, all the medical books say so

    Ron: Brilliant!

    Hermione: Ron you slobber too much use that super duper hard spell you learned last week copying my homework

    Ron:Wicked!... no wait a minute, not wicked, not wicked at all! I was staring at your tits the whole time! I dunno what to do!

    Hermione: You perv.

    Ron: Alllllll riiiiiight!

    Hermione: I should of stayed with Super star Krum, why the fuck I ever chose a POOR, PATHETIC, SIDEKICK, over a international Quidditch star with a huge broomstick, I'll never know!

    Ron: Yeah that wasn't too BRILLIANT!


    Ron = [​IMG]
     
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    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    LOL!
     
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    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    i stand corrected 8) :lol: hahah
     
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    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    :p

    BRILLIANT! :D
     
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    Redeye Penultimate Lurker DLP Supporter

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    Who else but Quagmire?!!
     
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    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Haha.

    I personally like your blow-by-blow... or shall I say chapter-by-chapter bashing of the sixth book. You only had like... four things good to say about anything in the whole thing. Actually, it coulda been less than four. :p