the bad thing was, I wasn't setting out to bash it!

I wrote down each thing I liked, and then the things I disliked. I didn't blatantly leave out something I liked, and add in a ton of stuff I didn't to make it seem worse then it really is.

God how I wish that was what I did, and HBP was much, much better =(

I left out the chapt by chapt review, for the fact that it doesn't of seem to have gotten a following =(

 

It's something that hapens in many fics Harry, becomes all powerful but fears Herman or Ginny and does anything they say.

 

Most authors that write HP/GW fics do not understand that IF they make Harry godlike, he should fear no one. HP/BL and HP/NM authors understand that and most of them make them his slaves or something like that. I even read a story in which Harry kicks the crap out of half the Order and Dubmbledore with the help of his pets and SUPER-POWER but does nothing to even try to kill Voldemort..... sounds pretty dum to me!

 

Meh.

Personally I like Scheming!Suped Up!Harry... But only if his scheme's come to pass in a timely fashion.

 

I like intresting plots without plot holes, a rarity out there.

 

Interesting plots w/o plotholes?

I take it you hate canon then

 

Of course not I love all things canon, HBP for example I mean how can you not like a book with great things like luck potions, unbreakable vows, a werewolf named Fenrir, withered hands, H/G and so much more.

 

Nuit, I am either sensing alot of denial, sarcasm or a LOT of mental instability :? . You should get that looked at either way

 

hmm...
wards off previous reviewers with grapefruit spoon.
*sight* am safe now
Sunset...- I'd say they were really good at the begining, the authors' pet peeves a nice tidbit to read, but lately I have to force myself to read next chapter. Pity, really.

 

Sorry,

Sorry but I am still a staunch supporter of this masterpiece. Great writing, great style, and probably the best Harry/Hermione piece ever written. I stick by my opinion.

 

Re: Sorry,

That's like saying that one pile of dung smells better than the rest. But seriously, I would like the fic if Harry would just start fucking killing people already. A super powerful Harry that still takes shit from peons like Snape and Ron gets no respect from me.

 

Re: Sorry,

I still wouldn't like it, but at least they'd be SOMETHING to it. Its like the two of them had a good idea for a middle and an end, but can't figure out how the hell to get there.

I expect better of these two, their other stories were infested with harry/ginny filth, but other then that, it was good solid writing. I can't classify wth this crap is.

 

i've had this on my 'to read' section for a while, but i can not stomach h/hr...

 

Harry/Hermione isn't so bad as long as the author doesn't make her obsessed with the rules. There is nothing wrong with having a brainy girlfriend...

 

Link doesn't work anymore, FF removed it?

 

Aye it just vanished.

 

GODDAMN BASTARDS!!!!!

GOD DAMN BASTARDS!!!! THEY REALLY NEED TO STOP DOING THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT WE NEED IS FOR SOMEBODY TO TAKE THEIR HEADS OUT OF THEIR COLLECTIVE ASSES!!

P.S.
It can still be found at their Yahoo group: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/snorkack/