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Complete Sunset/Sunrise Over Britain by Bobmin356 - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Giovanni, Aug 7, 2005.

  1. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Uhhh... why'd they get rid of it? It wasnt even that bad...
     
  2. realmess

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    o_O yep the link is not working, weird 'cause I didn't even get a chance to read the last chapter, and it's gone. I tried the search but no luck there. Pity. I have no idea why would that got pulled?
    maybe some ad was feeling frustrated? or their pet peeves offended someone. stupid really. I you don't like the story you can just skip reading it.
     
  3. Avitus

    Avitus Groundskeeper

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    omg....are you kidding me? this is really starting to get rediculous over at ff.net :evil:
     
  4. RagefulLlama

    RagefulLlama Seventh Year

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    That is rather sad. Are they going to start deleting the old fics that have not been edited since the new no response rules? *sighs*
     
  5. magyareagle

    magyareagle Guest

    like I said

    you can still find the fic at their yahoo group
    http://groups.yahoo.com/group/snorkack/
    and you the authors are setting up a website of their own. The fic is still being continued and the next chapter should be up within a couple of days at the yahoo group.
    Not as convenient as ff.net but at least it wont be abandoned.
     
  6. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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  7. Anonymous

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    You're kidding right?

    @_@'

    You guys are kidding right? This is a huge 5 page thread I
    just went through where everyone here is pissed because
    Harry isn't out slaughtering his enemies and not allowing the
    new powers he STILL can't fully control to consume him...
    and now that FF.net (may they rot in pieces) deleted the
    story becuase some numbnut asswipe who probably was
    thinking the same stuff the rest of you spent FIVE pages in
    full on rant mode complaining about decided to complain to
    the people who matter (fuck finger'd mods on FF.net) ...

    C'mon! Why the surprised faces?

    For anyone who actually *wants* to read the story they've
    got a new page setup with help from Jecoanais...

    [ http://bobmin.fanficauthors.net/Sunset_Over_Britain/index.html ]

    --bornagainpenguin (who wishes more people would learn to
    hit the backpage button on their browser instead of abusing
    the 'abuse' button)
     
  8. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Re: You're kidding right?

    I agree about the backpage button. I dislike the story simply because I know they can do better, and it seems like a half assed attempt at a new story. I'm sure the ending will pick up, but for the most part you cannot deny for a super Harry he's a little bitch in this story, and it really does ruin it.

    We all hate ff.net, and any story removed that isn't extreme fluff bullshit, or slash, usually doesn't deserve the treatment they give it.
     
  9. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Rape, Gay Pedophilia, 18-way orgies between Harry, Draco, Snape, Voldemort, and Lucius Malfoy are OK!!!

    But straight, consenting, relationships between 2 non-harry/ginny characters are considered evil and must be destroyed.

    Someone should shoot the admins.
     
  10. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    not true gio... Harry and Cho hsve con-sex in my story and its still up
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    But for how long? *X-Files music plays*
     
  12. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    ahut up and stop jinxing it Syaoran!!
     
  13. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I retract my previous statement, about liking the story but being disappointed by this fic. What the fuck has happened to the skill those two had weaving a story? And don't give me that "wants to control his powers crap" it's obvious , blatantly, in this chapter he's got them in near full swing.

    They've turned thier whiny, Hermione obeying Harry into a pussy, who now asks permission before doing anything to the people who tried to attack him??! He ends it with a good punishment, but it doesn't even work, when he had to ASK permission to do it? wtf?

    then it's followed with this gem.

    I groaned out loud. So.. we have pussy Harry most of the story, he grows balls and does something.. but only after begging to be able to, shows some Slytherin like scheming against Dumbledore,

    -what the fuck is with that tin whistle?!?!

    -Dumbledore being twisted I could get, him worrying about his reputation to the point he tried to give the DE children a reasonable way out is just.. ug.

    -what is with people and staffs nowadays?

    I did have hopes with this story about the mass exodus from Britian, but this chapter just killed it for me for some reason, they're drawing out the leaving like hell, pussifying Harry the entire time, when he's supposed to be this great power who's gonna save everyone.

    More power to you if you like it, I give up with it.
     
  14. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I gave up awhile ago, my friend. Very disappointing. I can't even STAND god-like Harry fics (unless they're REALLY well done.)


    Some ancient god always says, "(you are worthy /you have been wronged) and now I will give you my strength." Its CHEAP story telling making Harry not work for it. I have in my story, a way for Harry to get powerful quick, but not too powerful. ANd its pretty logical.
     
  15. LT2000

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    I rather like my demigod-ish Harry. It makes him able to kill a lot of people. But in this story it sucks, because he hasn't splattered Dumbles all over the Great Hall. And he's paired with Hermione. :wink:
     
  16. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    YOu fall under the "REALLY well written" category. Also, you didn't make Harry RIDICULOUSLY powerful (think willing things to occur and they JUST DO!)
     
  17. Anonymous

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    ROFL!

    Rather amusing how all the whining comes from the people that seem enjoy Harry turning into a rampaging lunatic. You don't like the story? Don't read it. There's plenty of other stories out there you can read instead. :D
     
  18. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I want Harry to grow a sack and stop taking shit. THe dude is a God but he sits there whining. I don't how much more powerful he could be before he says, "HEY, I have the power. I'm gonna change things."

    THAT is what I don't like. ANd I don't read it unless I'm REALLY bored.
     
  19. LT2000

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    Re: ROFL!

    And just what did you expect? The name of the forum is Dark Lord Potter. I don't know about rampaging lunatics (though the Harry in my fic is admittedly close to one), but I certainly don't enjoy a Harry that has to ask his little hermaphrodite girlfriend for permission to beat somebody's ass and lets people that he could kill with a wave of his hand walk all over him. He just screams "housebroken male" in this fic.
     
  20. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Re: ROFL!

    I concur... though i do at times crave the occasional rampaginc lunatic harry... as is obvious in Lust... but as far as this fic goes... just neuter him and be dun with it... we dont need more of these bitchy little punks around...