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Oneshot Take Out The Seeker by Nightbreak - PG13 - HP/Padma

Discussion in 'Romance' started by Jeram, Nov 5, 2006.

  1. Jeram

    Jeram Elder of Zion ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Title: Take Out The Seeker
    Author: Nightbreak aka CSI_Tokyo3
    Rating: PG-13
    Genre: Romance
    Pairing: Harry/Padma
    Published: August 24, 2006
    Status: Complete (One-shot)
    Summary:Quidditch held no interest for her. Why, then, was she always there?
    Link: http://csi-tokyo3.livejournal.com/36595.html Live Journal Purged, No other copy found

    This is actually not such a bad little story about a post-Voldemort-killing Harry at Hogwarts, and his relationship with Padma. Points off for not killing Draco explicitly (but at least he is never, ever, mentioned).

    4/5
    -J


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  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Sounds fairly interesting. I'll read it now and review soon.
     
  3. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Ditto. The Jon shall also read and perhaps review.

    EDIT: Super awesome. -thumbs up.-
     
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  4. Thalarian

    Thalarian Seventh Year

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    Was a nice one shot. Seemed a bit rushed in some places but would have definitely prefered it to have gone on for more then one chapter.

    Either way, it was Harry and Padma, so get's a nod from me. (I love Padma!! ^_^)

    4/5
     
  5. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Indeed. It was rushed in places. It gave me something to read, however. It was a good little oneshot.
     
  6. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    This fic automatically gets 3 points from me for the pairing, however other than that, I found this pretty bland. It was drawn out and pretty pointless in my opinion, much like HBP. 3/5
     
  7. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    i liked it, 4/5 for origionality but he loses points for pace. on a more important note. i just hit 30 in WOW. sweet.
     
  8. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    It was alright, had a good pairing and was a little sweet. Felt drawn out and alternately rushed in places.
     
  9. Mage

    Mage Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    4/5, i liked it though i do have to agree that the story tempo was a little out of wack.
     
  10. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    the pairing was very enjoyable...the dialogue felt a little forced..tempo was fast paced but readable...
     
  11. the-caitiff

    the-caitiff Death Eater

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    4/5 I enjoyed it quite a bit.
     
  12. Taure

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    Nice little one-shot to distract me from work with one of the best pairings around, and a nice, non-explicit, approach to a smut (not that explicit smut is bad, this is just a nice change).

    4/5
     
  13. huntedorange

    huntedorange Seventh Year

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    really enjoyed this, one of the best romance one-shots i have read, while not brilliant very much worth a read. 4/5
     
  14. HardcoreHobbit

    HardcoreHobbit Second Year

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    Not half bad. I like it. On occasion, it's nice to read something that isn't full of action and heavy on plot. Good pairing too.

    4/5

    Anyway, back to my regularly scheduled psychology report, one hour and 30 minutes to deadline.
     
  15. KirijamaScion

    KirijamaScion First Year

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    Good Story, little short for my taste but not everyone likes the epic length. Solid 4 out of 5 maybe 4.5 on the outside.

    On a side note Padma is not used enough in stories I think there ought to be more of her. Yes more Padma she'd make an excellent Dark Lady Potter.
     
  16. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    holy shit. talk about resurrecting a dead post. Here i was thinking i had never read this before, and then i see my comment. i hit 30 on wow with that charcter nearly a year ago i think. that was a blast from the past.
     
  17. Nicovi

    Nicovi Fourth Year

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