Well, sorry to barge in like this but I would like to say that I enjoyed the beginning a lot but, as many of you stated it's becoming stale. Maybe when he gets to the part where he meets SG-1, the story will deserve full, or almost full 5 out of 5, now it's at 2.5/5

 

Agreed. I to worried about that until the bottom of chapter 7 when Esama said "No, the story will not be slash". I am still scared of flashes of slash coming through in Esama's writing though. It's hard to read slash authors writing het sometimes. As long as the author doesn't bring in Vampires, otherwise I'll be pressing Alt+F4 straight away. Fucking slash magnets.

Besides that I am enjoying the story alot, even if it is slow. The author seems to be having trouble with actually finding a plot, so the story is probally going to go on Hiatus soon or either keep on posting with no real direction to where the story is going.

For now though based on Esama's current work, abit slow but overall 4/5.

 

This story has been abandoned.

That said, I didn't read past the first three chapters when I realized how young Harry was and how damn slow the story was progressing.

 

The author's ambition is to write the largest sum of words as possible to describe nothing happening. I'm serious, go read his other fics.