Title: Teeth
Author: ManicR
Published: September 14, 2006
Status: Complete/ONESHOT
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Horror/General

Summary: Harry draws a picture. A pre-Hogwarts, slight AU one-shot. Slight horror.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3153752/1/

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It's a nice look into the darker aspect of Harry's childhood.

4/5


Checked by Minion, January 23, 2016
Dead Link is still dead.
I added a textfile with the (rather short) story.
If you know where to find another copy of the story, please inform the library staff.

 

Very nice. It is written very well, and gives Harry a perfect touch of child-like innocence. 4/5, quite good for an oneshot.

 

[sing-song voice] Freeeaky...[/sing-song voice]

I like it. Harry isnt too Out of Character and the man in the picture... brr freaky. 4.5/5

 

Bloody freaky, but very well written. I always knew Harry was a creepy little kid....

5/5

 

This is the most orginal introduction to Harry's scar connection to Voldemort I have ever read.

5/5

 

That was good, and Harry was written very nicely. I liked it so...4/5

 

That made my day. Very well written, excellent mood setting. Awesome dark lord...maybe it is a bad idea to say his name.

5/5

 

Pretty freaking awesome. I love the mix of innocence and horror.

5/5

 

Definitely 5/5, too bad it's a one-shot. Everytime I read a pre-Hogwarts one-shot nowadays, I always think about the absolutely useless idiot Harry will become in HBP.

 

I loved it. 5/5

 

5/5. Love.

 

This person should definitely continue this story; maybe make that the prolog and start the rest of the story further into the story, showing a Harry that has lived his whole life with an incredibly open connection to Voldemort.

5/5

 

Very nice. 4/5

 

Wow--that was like something out of "Candy Man" or "Nightmare on Elm Street" or "The Omen" or some such thing! Very, very good. Aside from the grammatical errors, it was pretty sweet. 4/5 for me as well.

 

5/5 *Love*

Someone poke the author untill he continues the story!

 

Excellent.... (Does best Mr. Burns impersonation) 5/5

 

This story was absolutely excellent. The first thing I did when finishing this story was to archive it, and the second was to bookmark his author page. Gems like this have a way of being reported and deleted through no fault of their own. I am seriously considering getting a Fanfic.net account just to leave a review asking him to continue it.

 

5/5
Very nicely done. I find the picture a bit creepy, but that is to be expected. DemonDream, I'm aready going to ask him to continue it. It was accepted by most readers as the author intended, which I find is getting less and less common as time goes by.

 

Wow that was terrific. One of the best one shots i have read. Its a terrific portrayal of disturbed Harry. 5/5

 

Very nice one-shot, dark and scary. 5/5