Glad to see this story on the site. 5/5

 

Magnificent.
I haven't been this creeped out since I saw "The Omen" when I was a kid.

 

FUCK BURGER!

That's Creepy SHIT!!!

5/5

 

This is really cool. I'd love to say excellent, but I wont, because the spelling/grammar did quite shit me. Still, it is very much recommended.

4/5

 

This was interesting...quite a view into the vaguely (or very) demented kid that Harry Potter was. Cool Cool. 4.5/5

 

Very interesting one-shot, very effective although that's probably due to the complete opposites of nice polite Harry and the teeth wanting to rip and eat her and the scene manage to overshadow the spelling and grammar mistakes for me.

5/5

 

That was delightfully evil. Kid's got some talent, doesn't he? That reminded me in a lot of ways of Poppy Brite's Drawing Blood -- the imagery is very close.

Shame that's a oneshot. It deserves more.

 

very creepy nice one-shot work on spelling/grammar 4/10

 

Um, I don't know if this is allowed but I'm the author; Hi! I just joined.

Thank you all for liking my story, despite the grammar and spelling mistakes. I'm not a native English speaker but I try my best.

I've been considering making a series out of it but I'm not certain, your comments are noted and pondered upon.

Thank you again, and I apologize if this isn't allowed.

 

I love it when Authors stumble on the threads of their own stories.

It happened to me, and I love seeing it happened to other people.

There's nothing wrong with that - we're always welcoming new members, especially those who are authors

Here's some rep, just because you have a kick-ass story.

 

Glad to see you on the site man. This story is damn good, keep up the great work.

 

I liked it alot actualy, kinda weird, scary and morbid but he mixed the innocence of harry so well, definetly 5/5

 

I'm with everyone else here. Very morbid, a little creepy, and an ending that freaked me out just a little. 5/5

 

3/5, just not a spectacular fic at all. I'm a little confused by the unanimously high ratings that it's gotten...apart from the last two lines of the fic (which made it seem like a humor fic, slightly), the rest was at best slightly dark in tone and atmosphere.

Just not stunning enough to warrant more than a 3 in my book :/

 

I'm rather tempted to agree with Xiph0 and Yarrgh. I don't see this as a good horror fic. If we're rating it on that, I'd have to give it a 1, because I don't think it fulfills its genre requirement. In general, it's well written and an interesting peek at Harry's childhood - which is an underdeveloped niche, yes - but despite the fact that I'd give it a 4 for the thing in general, because it doesn't fulfill requirements, I'd have to give it a mean score of 2.5.

 

I'm going to have to disagree.

To me, it seemed like the teacher was getting a glance into the mind of a child who shares his mind with the most evil person to live. It had the feel of sinking deeper and deeper into a nightmare, only to wake up at the end and forget it.

I liked it.