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The Art of Dueling by Random Shinobi - PG13

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Xiph0, Jun 26, 2007.

2.8571429252625/5, 7 votes
  1. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Jun 26, 2007 #1
    Title: The Art of Dueling
    Author: Random Shinobi
    Rating: PG-13
    Genre: Humor
    DLP Category: Humor/Parody
    Pairing: H/G & H/L implied
    Status: WIP
    Summary: Harry finds an old parchment that instructs him in how to properly use his...wand.
    Link: Ficwad

    Very lulz.
     
  2. malaga

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    Jun 26, 2007 #2
    I think I read this before, when there was only one chapter. Wasn't it recommended here before?

    Edit:Whoops, must have found it elsewhere then. I thought it was a bit obvious, and rather dull. Not my cup of tea.
     
    Last edited: Jun 26, 2007
  3. Xiph0

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    <_< I should've checked, one sec.

    Edit: If it was, it isn't in the Library. o_o
     
  4. The Dark Monarch

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    Jun 26, 2007 #4
    2/5

    Really quite bland.
     
  5. carvell

    carvell Professor DLP Supporter

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    Jun 29, 2007 #5
    It got a few laughs out of me but the chapter's are too short,
    2.5/5
     
  6. Snarf

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    It was rather forced and right-in-your-face to me. I mean, if Harry is that slow it kind of takes away from the story. Meh, I guess I like subtler innuendos.
     
  7. Marie M

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    Jun 30, 2007 #7
    Well it was funny, but Harry's not that slow and I too prefer subtler innuendos.
     
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