That was beyond pathetic..... The was no direction to the story and not meaning either. The author seem to skip whole sections and expects you to understand.

 

All of these are pathetic!

But Yarrgh, I can identify with you. Those kind of fics are my guilty pleasure fics. Stained Future? I loved his stories. This guy? Not all that bad, if it weren't for the ghetto-speak.

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1527263/1/ This is the brilliant story by vertex

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2955912/1/ This is a "sequel made by a "Dipshit"

Ex. profacy=Prophecy

Bluemagicmarker- good review/flame

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2303133/1/

I won't even attempt to find a suitable quote, as the whole story is a grammatical train wreck, and the plot sucks. Interestingly enough, this story gave me a reason to make a 'Bad Fics' folder in my favorites list.

 

ROFL! Madeye...WTF was that sequel? Oh dear god..."Since you are a general, you will be riding a hippogriff."

Fuck...i'd put a condemned man on a hippogriff..they're shitty animals! Christ...Grimmwold place, profacy...its terrible.

And this scene made me laugh my ass off:

"Harry, can we stay together"

"Uh, ok"

"You don't ahve to sleep alone..."

"You mean...i can share a bed with you again?"

*they kiss passionately*

ROFL! God, what a shitty, cliche, trainwreck of a story...if he was a member here, i'd make it my life's purpose to negative rep him.

Wow.

 

Ugh...that was terrible.

Lame....just lame. Fangirls need to be boiled in fucking oil...maybe it'll stop them from writing garbage.

Yeah, coz they really had mp3s in the fucking 90s. Worst.Mary-sue.Ever.

Why do fangirls always put their life stories into fanfics? NO ONE CARES!

 

When a guy says this he means "Will you drink my seed"

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2793861/1/

Really shitty grammar. Just gah... headache

 

Psst Myst http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?goto=newpost&t=2112

 

Gasp, this fic was posted here in Dark Arts by Lebby. This story can suck my balls.

 

Haha, I didnt even notice that story, But then again, I rarely ever check the Dark Arts section. I found that the old fashion way. Trial and Error.

 

On that second one...

And UPDATED car???? WTF?? So are you saying I can download and install an update to my car?? That is so cool. (I didn't get past that line BTW)

 

http://forums.darklordpotter.net/member.php?u=1304 Cupdentard strikes again.


Edit: there we go, nice and edited...

 

Edit: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2979933/1/ ..Not sure if it is just me but Linky's link didnt work for me so there.

And Trident (or known as RainCheck, he made another ff.net profile) seems to like taking the idea's posted here....so i'd say he does this for shits and giggles

 

oops... i posted the wrong fucking link... damn it...

im going to change it now...

 

Well, you can't really say that he stole the idea, as it was a challenge.

He does suck at writing, however, as it lacks flow, enough description.

It also lacks atmosphere and mood, like everything is just "Hey! This happened, I killed her, whatever!"

Not that I'm implying I'm the god of writing either, though.

I'm also a bit peeved at the "getting lost in Voldemort's memories" idea he seemed to "borrow".

But then, I guess some other fics might have used them before I did, and it does make sense.

 

Well, the thing is that he was supposed to be banned from the site when the challenge was posted, so he shouldn't have been able to see it.

 

I don't know if this is a joke, or is the product of two retarded masses of vapid assjuice.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2985018/1/

 

Honestly, what the fuck?