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WIP The Butterfly Effect By Caspian Cambell - T

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by The-Hyphenated-One, Jun 8, 2015.

  1. The-Hyphenated-One

    The-Hyphenated-One Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Title: The Butterfly Effect
    Author: CaspianCambell
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Humor
    Chapters: 10
    Words: 53,205
    Updated: Jun 7
    Published: May 17
    Status: WIP
    Library Category: Alternates
    Pairings: None yet
    Summary: Promise me Hagrid - promise me you'll go back and check on him." Just a few words said differently could have changed history. Fate throws baby Harry into the custody of Kingsley Shacklebolt, assisted by a certain Alastor Moody. Heads will roll and history will change when this gets out. Dear world: The Chosen One has arrived, and he's here to kick your ass

    Link: The Butterfly Effect

    Stumbled across this one through scryer. The writing is pretty solid and the pace seems to be fairly quick as are the updates. The premise is something I haven't seen before, at least not done well. It's 50k words in and the rating might go up based on where the author takes it. It seems like a pretty massive undertaking for a story though.


    Rating: 3.5/5



    Edit by Minion: Proper formatting
     
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  2. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    The original content is pretty good, but it falls to my personal pet peeve of copying sections of text from the original stories directly.

    Edit: Read what's there. 2/5. Readable, but not expecting anything groundbreaking.
     
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  3. KGB

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    This fic uses the phrase "establish allies" unironically. Didn't read past that, because I imagine it involves Harry and his slytherin friends tickling each others bollocks with a swan feather due to "wizarding traditions".

    Also the whole obliviationg Hagrid because "He's far too loyal to Dumbledore" smacks a bit to much of manipulative!Dumbles.
     
  4. Photon

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    From reading random part of chapter 10 - it includes a standard bad fanon - a senile Dumbledore (""I just can't understand that man," sighed Kingsley. "He used to be so brilliant."").

    I am not going to read or rate this but I am not expecting a well written story.
     
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