Title: The Chosen One's Chosen
Author: Triggerbox
Rating: M
Genre: Humor
Status: Complete
Summary: Harry returns to Hogwarts from a successful summer of destroying the last remaining horcruxes to receive an interesting idea on how he could help the war effort. Harry/Harem.
Link: http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=18454

A funny uptake on the whole Harry/Harem genre. No smut yet but it's only the first chapter. Well written and very funny.

I recommend this for a good laugh.

 

I thought it was pretty funny fir a first chapter, as long as the author can keep it up it should be an okay story. There were a few grammer/spelling mistakes but not too many to be annoying, they can mostly be overlooked.

 

Hahaha, not bad. Hope it's continued.

 

Yeah, it was funny - although the "Shiny Bottom" part was a bit forced at times, that little article clipping was damn funny. Certainly interested in reading more.

 

I doubt it will continue, but I like that we didn't see any of Harry. I would be great if the whole thing wasn't actually happening(ie the Daily Prophet was exaggerating the whole story) - or at least if we never saw it happen from Harry's point of view.

 

hahaha that was funny Hahahaha

 

It was fairly funny, though I hope the author improves on his delivery. I do look forward to future chapters.

 

The story seems to be discontinued. In fact, the story itself is only current the prologue. With that being said, the humor was sort of lost on me in this story. It seemed to me just changing names, and puns which failed in my opinion. As it is only a prologue that is 2,000 words, discontinued, and not that funny.

I'll have to go ahead and give it a 2/5. It had potential but I don't believe it is Recycling Bin worthy even.

 

It's not funny, and the author has an annoying habit of calling Voldemort things like 'scaly butt.'

A 3-year-old prologue to a non-existent fic has no business even in the Recycling Bin.

1/5