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The Crux of the Matter by mjc -M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Midknight, Oct 30, 2005.

  1. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    Looks like you broke the link! The correct url is:
    http://www.wizardtales.net/viewstory.php?sid=1647

    --bornagainpenguin
     
  2. Nytmare

    Nytmare Fourth Year

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    how do you find all these links and necro the posts.
    or better yet, How do you sleep at night?
     
  3. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Massive, Massive spacial abuse, trunks holding Dumbledore's libraries, a lifetime worth of penseive memories, a fully stocked potions lab, and fifty thousand galleons.

    Harry pretty much inherits all of Albus' estate (which I suppose is at least somewhat understandable, at least it wasn't Hermione that got the library)

    Oh yes, and harry fears the 'dreaded bat boogy' hex enough to bring Ginny with them, all this, and it's only chapter one...

    (On the plus side it's implied that buckbeak savaged Snape at some point.)

    -Snorts- and apparently Ginny has a good chuck of Riddle's early memories as they transferred while he was sucking the life out of her.

    Oooh even better, you gain someone else's expirences by inserting their pensieve memories into your head.

    "It's OK everyone, I have all of Albus' memories now, so voldimort should be no problem as soon as I get around to destroying those lovely horcrucies of his!"

    I'm sorry, it got bad enough to force me into skimming even though I don't mind the occasional H/G.

    Somewhat decent plot, and grammer is well done, but way to many cliche' in chapter1.

    2/5
     
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