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Complete The Denarian Knight by Shezza88 - M - Dresden Files

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Rehio, Oct 26, 2007.

4.6346154212952/5, 104 votes
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  1. Mors

    Mors Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    May 4, 2008 #1561
    A Filler Chapter! We've Been Duped, Associates! Duped!
     
  2. Grubdubdub

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    May 4, 2008 #1562
    A short one, too. It was funny though. I think in some points it's not very smooth but it's mostly fine.
     
  3. Datakim

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    May 4, 2008 #1563
    Very nice to see another chapter. For a moment there I was starting to get worried that you had grown tired of the story and abandoned it. Glad to see I was wrong. Hopefully this means that we will be getting more soon too! :)

    Nothing major happened in the chapter so far so I dont really have anything to say about it except that Harrys antics were amusing. Looking forward to the detention with Umbridge and how Harry plans to deal with that.
     
  4. Blazing Chime

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    May 4, 2008 #1564
    This chapter was so hilarious that I can't stop laughing.:D
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  5. Antivash

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    May 4, 2008 #1565
    No Worries Shezza, I'll merge the thread with the rest of the story thread later... Also, I moved DK and DR to Dresden. *shrugs* seemed empty and lonely. D:
     
  6. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    May 4, 2008 #1566
    Shezza, I hate you. I just wasted 20 minutes of my life splitting your story and your numerous reviews apart. -_-
     
  7. Redd Lenses

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    OMFG, That was pure gold.
     
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  8. Link

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    May 4, 2008 #1568
    Haha. You're good. Harry's good. Meciel's good. Amaris' good. There just not enough smut, but well... I'm still waiting for the omake!!

    Seems like those 'vacations' you took did you a lot of good, on your writing at least.
     
  9. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

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    May 4, 2008 #1569
    Not very intelligent, are you, lnky?
     
  10. Dr. Strange Lulz

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    May 4, 2008 #1570
    I wish I had a +1 Hat of Magickery like Fudge. The power of dust within the Nintendoid cartridges has thwarted me many a time...

    Dope, keep up the good work mate.
     
  11. Cxjenious

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    May 4, 2008 #1571
    that was... ridiculously funny. stupid bint... priceless

    ... retard. - Sree


    Yeah, I have I serious problem with reading instructions... my bad.
     
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  12. Philly Homer

    Philly Homer What you call elephant cum I call mouthwash

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    May 4, 2008 #1572
    Holy Shit! You have outdone yourself Shezza, my sides are hurting. Sirius raising an army of Nintendoids pushed me into hysterically laughing. Umbridge's reaction were priceless, I could just imagine her facial expression as Harry revealed such classified information to her. Thanks a lot for lulz, Shezza.

    Now let's get some action.
    :whipped:
     
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    If my stomach wasn't already hurting I'd swear you made me bleed internally through laughing. Stup'd B'nt indeed.

    Aekiel
     
  14. Ragon

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    May 4, 2008 #1574
    Okay so maybe I could wait for another one like that. Sirius is going to destroy the Ministry with the power of Mario, Luigi, Donkey Kong, Zelda, Link, Bowser, Star Fox, etc...
     
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    May 5, 2008 #1575
    I didn't see the point refreshing the page when I finished reading the chapter. So I didn't see you moved the other posts. Does that make me stupid? Or retard?
     
  16. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

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    May 6, 2008 #1577
    Love the story Shezza and loved the first one also

    Can't wait for more
     
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    May 6, 2008 #1578
    You just know that this chapter was a very carefully done piece of foreshadowing.

    When, in the last chapter of Denarian Lord/Prince, Sirius marches into the Ministry of Magic with hundreds of Nintendo characters behind him, we'll see who's laughing...
     
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    Oh dont worry I will be laughing right along with em when it happens.
     
  20. Demons In The Night

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    May 10, 2008 #1580
    heh. That was pure fucking gold.

    It's nice to see you back after the long layoff. I was just going to make a 'where hath Shezza gone' thread, but then I saw that you updated.

    God I can't wait until Umbridge bites the bullet. I hope you make her death scene epic.
     
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