I am sad the new Denarian died. She gave him a real fight, had interesting abilities, and Harry had to work to beat her.

Glad to see some back story on the Denarian Lords. Especially Harry's theory on why he is a chosen Knight of the Sword appealed to me.

Meciel smacking him as a recurring theme always makes me happy. Nice update Shezz.

Retcon the new Denarian and bring her back to life.

 

I tend to think of Meciel as well rounded, I mean, how many Denarians do you see wielding hellfire? Sure, they may have access to it, but how many actually shoot beams of hellfire at people? None really. Most Denarians rely on their demon form to do actual damage, which in turn, can make them loose their sense of self control.

Harry is good, but he would be nothing without Meciel. She gives him the power and healing abilities, you can't attribute harry being completely amazing to just harry.

 

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Your Cessbulby is inferior to mine.

 

Pretty in pink > Dark emo look imo.

 

Nicely done Shezza, trust Harry to get stuck with the only estate-agent with a conscious and moral fibre.. ah well, at least now he can have fun with this apartment too & Meciel can have her sacred silk sheets.

Enjoyed the fight, was nice to have some action again and for Harry to have some competition, not just playing games like he did with the first Assasin =).

Arrival of the Knights was a nice twist, but as Harry explained at the end, it kind of makes sense - and I think that has the other Knights worried, or at least shocked about how it all fits.

The last six lines too - sheer epic =).

Eagerly awaiting more!

 

Guess what Shezza, you've been nominated for a Quibbler Award! Now you get to compete against numerous slash fics to prove that you have the best crossover out there (Apparently Demon's Feign/Winter Knight/All the others didn't get nominated >_>).

http://quibbler.this-paradise.com/index.php

If anyone wants to beat the slash addicts we must vote.

 

Just FYI, Denarian Renegade is nominated for best cross-over and best action fic, so make sure you vote!

 

What exactly is this Quibbler award? Never heard of it before. Is it actually something major or important or is it just some lame award by some random person?

 

Posted my vote today just make sure to vote for nonjon in best comedy, jbern in best original character (sorting hat) and joe's wasteland of time for best characterization.

 

And Shezza's Denarian series bizatch, don't forget that.

 

The mighty legions of DLP demand Honky kinkyness.

Overall though good fragment, the only mistake that lept out was when Tonks was morphing, you typed 'chance' instead of change.

 

Great chapter, I loved the Harry and Tonks banter. And I would hope for some Honks kinkyness, as well.

 

Very very nice Shezza.

Loved it all, as usual.

 

Yo, Scene Two is up, guys.

 

I liked Harry's plan much better!
Great, as usual, can't wait for last scene.

 

Enjoyed the past two scenes Shez, Harry's plan was infinitely better, but still.. Honks in a different form, me-thinks? Meh... For some reason I like this more serious Tonks compared to the fun-loving, silly one that most people tend to write... eagerly awaiting scene 3 ^^.

 

Uh... I know this is AU but Tonks sucked and stealth and concealment in canon. I see no reason to change that, it gives her more character, the metamorph is a pro the clumsyness is a con. It balances out.