Hell for all we know she meet with Dumbledore. Probably not but anything is possible. Im gonna say it would be old Tom Tiddle.

 

Oh, didn't see the Prologue to DK before. That was creepy.

 

Hey shezza can Harry have some guns too? And maybe a trench coat ala matrix style? I think that would be really good. Oh yeah, meciel is too powerful, I think she should die so HP would be all alone against everybody in a battle royal except he should have cool looking machine guns, maybe super swords, and his wand which he can use to fuck bitches as well as the other one he can use to cast magic to get bitches so he can bang them and be real slick like.
Hope you use some of my suggestions and make this work probably 10x better. If you're looking for inspiration read the author named stained-future, he's really good at writing.
Good job so far though!

 

This post is either a hilarious exercise in sarcastic humor or a sad testament about the continuing degeneration of the human race.

 

It's an example of the latter I'm afraid...

OT. It was interesting to see Harry from his opponents POV and kinda lulzy in a strange sadistic way...

 

I suspect it was sarcastic, but it's far from hilarious. Sarcasm, generally speaking, works much better when it's pointed at someone, mocking them. This was just out of nowhere.

By the way, what's "cotton candy"? Candyfloss?

 

Yeah, it's the same stuff... It's actually making me want some now >_>.

 

The style of Denarian Lord thus far matches pretty well with what we've all seen before with Denarian Renegade and Denarian Knight.

True, it's only one chapter at this point, but we all know that Shezza's more than capable of maintaining a good update schedule, with good content to boot.

 

Rather than "Harry potter was coming back to England", you might use going. Coming would be used if it were the person he was visiting thinking, or speaking.

 

Nice start here. Especially the terrible news. Made my mouth water and whatnot. Mmmm. Extra Crispy.

 

My opinion is... teh ownage. I think it moved at a good pace, yet still beat the last few chapters of DK down hard. Maeve is hopefully gonna get it.

 

I wonder who was this mysterious wizard from the epilogue, after all Maeve owes Harry life debt so she should be unable to plot against him.

 

Unable to plot, I'm not sure about that, but i doubt she can kill him outright, or wants too. She said she needed him, but not so much anymore. So I duppose she wants something herself, not him dead. I think...

 

I personally think more blowing shit up is needed. IMO the more shit is blown up in these fics, the more I like to read them.

Seriously? I'm liking the intro. Can't wait for an update.

I reckon its a testament to Shezza's skill that friends of mine who screw their nose up at fanfiction are reading and liking his fics. Although there are some mistakes in the later chapters of DK (minor word mixups) I hear Shezza isn't native speaking (is he German?) so thats easily forgivable.

 

Lol, first he was male, now he's German.

For the record: Shezza is female, and he's from the UK.

www.myspace.com/shezza88

 

The internet moves in mysterious ways it seems. He should just post that he is indeed male at the beginning of each of the stories.

Now where the hell did I get the idea of a german woman from? I need to stop mixing authors up >.<

 

How did people get the idea that Shezza is a girl?

 

It's a relatively feminine name and as for the German thing I think that was mentioned in Bio's interview.

 

Yeah, I guess I did think that Shezza was a girl at least once.

And the interview does say he's a 'Berliner.'

 

Doughnut?

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