Rofl, naw ,definitely wasn't gonna smut. But he wasn't gonna leave it up to the readers imagination anyway.

 

Then you do it man!

 

Ladies and Gentlemen, today is an historic day on DLP. Given the number of members here, it had to happen eventually, but still, I'm very excited.

Yes, that's right people, it is my honour to announce to you today the enagement of Shezza and Jon, after months of deep love and shared plot secrets between them.

 

Can Harry get an STD?

 

Haha! Then try and 'persuade' Shezza to write some smut if you don't want to do it...

 

Wow, sorry I didn't check this thread for a couple days.

Congrats to your upcoming nuptials! Looking forward to the writings of your offspring!

 

D'awwww. That's sweet. Jonicon's finally having luck with the ladies. And this one, too: (Just to remind us all how lucky Jon is.)

 

I agree in 100%, this story's way too perfect to risk fail-smut.

 

No Smut in this please. Smut rarely makes a fic. It breaks fics more often than not.

 

Not expect smut in this... More along the line of a one-shot...

 

I agree with regards to the smut.

However, were Shezza to write the sex scene in such a way that it was more than just smut and actually furthered the characterisation then I think it wouldn't be out of place.

I mean, it's effectively two enemies having sex. How do you go about that? Wouldn't it be really awkward? How do you have sex and stay on guard at the same time? Would they kiss or, like a prostitute, just fuck?

Exploring these questions would, I think, be interesting. And possibly humourous.

For example, Harry could end up treating her like utter dirt. Just another way of showing her he's in control, despite the fact that she thought she had seduced him. Like, I dunno, ramming his cock up her arse.

Or something.

 

I had thought about doing something like that, Taure, though more to the comedy side. While they're doing it they're both sort of moving into different positions that could potentially kill each other- e.g, around the neck, exposed back, etc. I had thought about writing a few hundred words on that (or have Harry introspect on it later on).

Anyway, I have one more day of uni before I get a two week break. I want to finish the chapter this weekend since I've just spent the last few days on a nasty American History Essay and an Education Presentation. Never fear, Jon will nag and threaten and I'll end up writing it

 

Harry's concern for diseases just might prove valid.

 

She is a Qira'ji Arachnid after all... And no matter how you look at it, the body is already dead. It just doesn't know it yet.

Her deamon form That is...

At least it look like one in my mind from the description we were given - -

 

found

abandon

repetition

I might be wrong here, but I'm pretty sure it should be "worst" and that there's a missing "that"

Tessa what?

the

whose

Inconsistency.

I hope you aren't planning on leaving us with this cliffhanger for long.

 

Not Greece but Alps on Italy/France border. Or in Roman times known as Gallia Cisalpina and Gallia Narbonensis respectively.