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Complete The Denarian Lord by Shezza 88 - M - Dresden Files

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by XxEnvyxX, Jun 29, 2008.

  1. jpdt19

    jpdt19 Fourth Year DLP Supporter

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    ABSOLUTELY worth the wait.

    But then again... positively diabolical cliffhanger.

    Superb Shezza, thanks so much again!
     
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  2. Krogan

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    Wow that was fucking epic, I know theres got to be some sort of catch in here like someone said that Dumbledore is going to make it out okay. I loved that fight, it was a great feeling seeing that Harry made it just in the nick of time and then that little stunned pause when he turns on Dumbledore was perfect. The only I could think was how surprisingly bastardish it was, not that I minded at all, it was just completely and totally shocking. Fucking epic and I cant wait for more.
     
  3. Catman

    Catman DA Member

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    You're fucking heartless lol, I practically broke down crying when I read that. Love this Dumbledore.

    EDIT to Andro down below:

    I thought about that myself after the fact, but that made it a little too obvious in my opinion. Maybe it was supposed to be, but there is also the mystery of who Maeve was wheeling and dealing with at the end of Denarian Knight. I started wondering if something happened to Harry on his way up and this is an impostor / the Mystery Wizard.

    I know that is extremely far fetched, but since I'm so convinced that there is much much more to this and it involves said mystery wizard, thats where my train of thought lead me.
     
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  4. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    I seem to recall reading this:

    So Dumbledore wasn't killed, it was a deception Harry employed as someone already mentioned.
     
  5. Innomine

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    We all know Andro, let the people enjoy the shock though. :p

    Loved the update as usual.

    Edit: 1337 posts bitches.
     
  6. Kthr

    Kthr Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    Yea, that was before he saw just how badly Dumbledore was beaten.

    Still, while I do hope it was a plot to get Albus out of there, I seem to remember that while Harry highly respects Dumbledore, he also acknowledge his fear of the old wizard.

    Awesome updates, and the fight against a knight was just fucking unfair, as it usual is.
     
  7. Cheyne

    Cheyne First Year

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    Great job as usual Shezza, only thing that stuck out to me
     
  8. Moloch

    Moloch Groundskeeper

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    Lurk more.
     
  9. Cheyne

    Cheyne First Year

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    Maybe I will!
     
  10. Aekiel

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    Then again, if Harry were to kill Dumbledore and Voldemort in one fell swoop, who else is there that could stop him from doing whatever the hell he wanted?
     
  11. KrzaQ

    KrzaQ Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Aurors? Seriously, he wouldn't be fresh enough to face them, even if they were no match for him any other time.
     
  12. fuubar

    fuubar Headmaster

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    Awesome stuff as always shezza.

    IMO it seems pretty obvious that he didn't kill AD, but it wouldn't necessarily be overtly out of character for him to do so either.

    Also LOL at the fuck-wits posting in the story thread.

    Edit: Just thought of this, could the mods set it so that only the person who posts a thread in the archive can respond to it ?
     
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  13. Hashasheen

    Hashasheen Half-Blood Prince

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    Cheyne's a retard.
     
  14. reggin

    reggin Filthy Half-Breed DLP Supporter

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    Awesome story, i'm all giddy and shit for the end :D

    Cheyne is about as dumb as the kids on Cops i'm watching now.
     
  15. Innomine

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    He could easily run and hide. He isn't gonna do a macho take over the world thing.
     
  16. Tasoli

    Tasoli Minister of Magic

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    I don't think Harry killed AD. Becouse Harry has dept to him. Now that depth has been fulfilled -at least partly-if he saved Dumbledor.

    it was amazing chapter I liked how Bella gone. It was way better than canon. -Stupid housewives ugh-

    I'm looking foward for next chapter
     
  17. Gullible

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    Couldn't have said it better myself, bravo.
     
  18. Twisted

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    Don't you guys know your canon, all healing spells set the target on fire and blast them out of buildings!

    I hope.

    Superb cliffhanger, I'll check back at 10pm GMT to see the next instalment (apparantly that is when s/he is posting.)
     
  19. KrzaQ

    KrzaQ Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Not really. Yesterday's "today" was yesterday, so, according to Chime??, he was supposed to post 20 hours and 27 minutes ago.

    Could he? He can't apparate, can't use portkeys and to the best of his knowledge - cannot go to Nevernever. All he's left is a broom - and all of these are locked on the quidditch pitch - and his legs. I'm pretty sure it'd be at least a little difficult to evade teams of Aurors, even if he could best them easily any other day.
     
  20. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    I should probably give you peons an explaination.

    Shezza was using a modem she ahd borrowed from her Uncle, he took it back about twelve hours ago. So no Shezza until she gets a new one. ;)
     
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