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WIP The Devil Pixie of Remnant by A Sometimes Lazy Writer - T

Discussion in 'Other Fandoms Review Board' started by MightlessPhilosopher, Jan 17, 2021.

  1. MightlessPhilosopher

    MightlessPhilosopher Banned

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    Title: The Devil Pixie of Remnant
    Author: A Sometimes Lazy Writer
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Humor
    Status: In-Progress
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    Summary: Beacon Academy has a brand new professor. A professor that is cold, calculating, and manipulative to a fault. May Being X be with those poor students. Rated T for language and some violence.
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12363112/1/The-Devil-Pixie-of-Remnant

    Instead of being reincarnated in the world of Youjo Senki, Tanya lived in an orphanage in Remnant until the fire nation attacked until Grimm murdered all of the village. Desperately trying to defend herself, Being X gives Tanya a powerful semblance that requires her to pray to Him every time she activate it.
    Because of her powerful ability, she is recruited by Atlas to become a soldier. She quickly rises through the ranks thanks to how merciless she is to her enemies, and thwarts an assassination attempt on General Ironwood. Because she dreams of a comfy job, she is overjoyed when she is tasked with teaching military tactics to students of Beacon.... And giving them hell for it.

    A fun story to read, nothing spectacular. I rate it 3 stars.
     
  2. Jarsha

    Jarsha Seventh Year

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    Consistent grammar and tense don't seem to exist for this story; borderline impossible to read. Character voices slur together into a jumbled mess, and every time Jaune's name is brought up it's a coin flip on him being Juan or Jaune.
    1/5