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Complete The Dread Chitin by Karazor -T- My Little Pony + Battletech

Discussion in 'My Little Pony' started by Dnar Semaj, Nov 24, 2011.

4/5, 4 votes
  1. Dnar Semaj

    Dnar Semaj Seventh Year

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    Nov 24, 2011 #1
    Title: The Dread Chitin
    Author: Karazor
    Rating: T
    Genre: Sci-fi / Adventure
    Status: Complete
    Fandom: My Little Pony FiM + BattleTech
    Pairings: None at all
    Summary: Stranded on a hostile, alien world, Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash must depend on one another and a fellow alien castaway if they want to return home to Equestria.
    Link: The Dread Chitin

    Very interesting. Interaction between ponies and human is believable. Not much action but what action the author does include is very cool. No furry vibes. The author actually says that he's not going to be shipping them and that they would find the idea disgusting. :awesome. 4/5.
     
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  2. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Dec 17, 2011 #2
    No one?

    C'mon guys. You all lust for little ponies. Leave some reviews please, or at least some ratings.

    I'll delete the thread if no one rates this within the next eight days.
     
  3. Red Aviary

    Red Aviary Hogdorinclawpuff ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Dec 18, 2011 #3
    I liked this one a lot more than his WH40K one. The interaction between the human and the ponies was a better, and that it actually had a clear goal and ending was much appreciated. The ending was actually very interesting, too.

    That's all I can really say about it though. It didn't really leave an impression on me. I mean, it was very good for what it was, but it's not something I'll be keeping among my favorites. Overall I'd give it a 4/5.
     
  4. Chengar Qordath

    Chengar Qordath The Final Pony ~ Prestige ~

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    Dec 20, 2011 #4
    I agree with Red on this one; it's a good story with a good ending, but it never really got that wow factor that would bump it up to amazing or memorable. The characters are good, the setting works, the human/pony interaction seems fairly realistic, but it never really grabbed me. It's just a solidly written story.

    4/5