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Abandoned The Hokage's Will by Airheaded dude - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Libye, Apr 17, 2010.

3/5, 4 votes
  1. Libye

    Libye Squib

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    Apr 17, 2010 #1
    Title: The Hokage's Will
    Author: Airheaded dude
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure
    DLP Category: independent
    Pairing: -
    Chapters: 15
    Words: 122,798
    Updated: June 28, 2010
    Published: Oct 13, 2009
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: The aftermath of Pain’s attack left Tsunade in comatose, Danzo's plot of becoming Hokage is thwarted by Naruto himself. With the doubts that the Lord of Fire has placed on Danzo, Naruto is suddenly left inheriting the mantle of Hokage before the Summit.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5439604/1/The_Hokages_Will

    I thought that the Naruto category could use new stories. "The Hokage's Will" is surprisingly good written although the title is a bit misleading. I like it how's everyone expecting Danzo to be Hokage and then there comes Naruto...

    4/5


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    Last edited by a moderator: Jul 28, 2016
  2. DarkAizen

    DarkAizen Professor DLP Supporter

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    May 19, 2010 #2
    Yeah, and it seems as the title of Hokage also comes with instant knowledge and wisdom.
    And admiration from everyone.

    I dont like it. I like to read stories about a strong!Naruto or even a story about Naruto with some brains. But this is over the top.

    The writing is good, there are no spelling mistakes.

    3/5.
     
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