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The Imperius Lesson by Jollatrix - NC17 - Harry/Lily

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Amerision, May 31, 2006.

4/5, 5 votes
  1. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    May 31, 2006 #1
    Title: The Imperius Lesson
    Author: Jollatrix
    Rating: NC-17

    Summary: Lily came back to life, and yet Harry is depressed. Not for long! Harry/Lily

    Challenge: By our very own DGoC!

    “Let Harry use the unforgivables on any of these ladies and let Harry have sex with them. That's all I ask.”

    Link: http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=544186954


    Asked to be posted here by Vash and some others.
     
  2. Zero

    Zero Seventh Year

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    That wasn't so bad actually. 8/10 Good for a one-shot.
     
  3. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    May 31, 2006 #3
    Predictable End.

    Good though.
     
  4. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    May 31, 2006 #4
    Not too bad at all. Sort of cool, really...since Vash's story ended sadly, this seems better than it really is.
     
  5. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    May 31, 2006 #5
    Too short and PWP-ish for my tastes. I like some story with my smut.
     
  6. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    AHHHH Stupid site sensoring!!!! I can't open the link. Is it posted anywhere else?
     
  7. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Jun 2, 2006 #7
    Blah.. Decent in a crap kind of way. I didnt like it though
     
  8. ulkser

    ulkser Groundskeeper

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    Jun 3, 2006 #8
    short. 7/10
     
  9. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    Jun 3, 2006 #9
    hmmm... i bet i could do better.... but then again...

    i am your very own *looks at Amerision and shakes his head* Demon god of Chaos.... Harry with Lily through the use of Imperius?

    I'll do that!!!!
     
  10. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Jun 4, 2006 #10
    Well, I didn't say you were mine...Just that you are here at DLP, and are therefore one of our own, of the same kind, etc.

    *Looks with doggy Eyes* So, will you write one?
     
  11. groundshaker

    groundshaker Squib

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  12. Yarrgh!

    Yarrgh! Pirate King

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    Jul 21, 2006 #12
    Jesus Christ.
     
  13. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    Jul 22, 2006 #13
  14. groundshaker

    groundshaker Squib

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    really? I had no probs reading it at all
     
  15. Brooklynight

    Brooklynight Seventh Year

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    Jul 23, 2006 #15
    Ehhh, decent but too short
     
  16. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    Jul 24, 2006 #16
    I'm in the Middle East. There is only one government owned internet provider which censors anything that it deems inappropriate... usually anything that may seem like adult material.
     
  17. groundshaker

    groundshaker Squib

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    ah ok, I didn't know that
     
  18. Vincent V

    Vincent V Slug Club Member

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    Jul 31, 2006 #18
    Didn't like it. Way to short and predictable.
     
  19. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    gonna have to go with vincent on this one. short and i was really hopinh for more. i dunno. just not up to snuff.
     
  20. fantasyfreak

    fantasyfreak Fifth Year

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    Aug 8, 2006 #20
    decent wasn't the best ending