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Complete The Lie I've Lived by jbern - M

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by jbern, Feb 9, 2007.

  1. Fenraellis

    Fenraellis Chief Warlock

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    I'll comment on it, since no one else did... or at least it seems that way.

    Should it not be "Because of your friend?", or even "Is it because of your friend?"

    I know that she's foreign, but I don't recall other instances of Aimee using broken English before this.:confused:
     
  2. Garnth

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    Nice chapter preview and another "Turn Me Loose" crossover after Kwan. "Nicolette" was in current TML 8 chapter.

    Hope this and all following chapters would be soon.

    Jbern let Muses be with you :)
     
    Last edited: Aug 4, 2008
  3. jbern

    jbern Alba Mater

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    You are correct - it is probably better off "Because of your friend?" Nice catch.

    Pers - Just ignore them. I doubt that I'll have the time to "play" with any of the trolls in the near future. So, they'll either get bored or even more juvenile. Bored means they go away and more juvenile means Mid comes in and tells them to go troll somewhere else on the board.

    Dethlok - I'll probably keep this Avatar until the book release and then switch back to the other one.

    Voice - I dunno when the Dead Eye site will be ready. I probably won't launch it until I'm 60 days out from a release date and that hasn't been set yet.
     
  4. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Alright, fucking stop it already, Bio, Darius. Stop posting in the thread if all you're going to do is flamebait.
     
  5. Immolo

    Immolo High Inquisitor

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    Is there any chance of a progress report on this chapter? I don want to rush you but this new chapter looks like it is going to be awesome.

    Does anyone other than me think one of the themes of the story is Harry saving girls from bad boyfriends by shagging them?
     
  6. uriel

    uriel Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    That's quite possibly the best thing idea I have read in awhile. You could write a story based completely on that one sentence and I'd still read it.

    I'm not sure that you could call it one of the themes of this fic... but it definitely should be. :D
     
  7. Immolo

    Immolo High Inquisitor

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    First he saved Melinda by shagging her and now he is going to save ye olde French chick via shagging.
     
  8. Grubdubdub

    Grubdubdub Supreme Mugwump

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    Too bad JKR didn't do it with Fluer/Tonks in canon.
     
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  9. Boofers

    Boofers Groundskeeper

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    You guys are turd nuggets.. What with the subsequent raising then dashing of my hopes for an update..
     
  10. jbern

    jbern Alba Mater

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    I was stuck on one scene, but managed to dislodge it. Currently, the chapter is at 7500 words with three scenes left to go. I expect to have that done by the end of the weekend, but since my second daughter was born on the 12th, family has the priority right now.

    Fortunately, this story is flowing better right now than TML, so when I do have time to write it is productive.
     
  11. The DarIm

    The DarIm Groundskeeper

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    Haven't really got anything to say about the story except that I really look forward to reading more.

    And JBern- Congratulations for being a dad again.
     
  12. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    ...so you want to turn HJ into 'Good Luck Chuck' ? Fail.

    And yeah, congrats JBern.
     
  13. Grubdubdub

    Grubdubdub Supreme Mugwump

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    In good luck chuck he shags them and then they find love, totally different. Or not...
     
  14. Voice of the Nephilim

    Voice of the Nephilim Death Eater DLP Supporter

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    Congratulations on the daughter, Jbern.

    If Lie is actually being productive when you write, with the limited time you have writing, wouldn't it probably be more efficient of you to temporarily put TML on hiatus? I think both stories are great, but why bang your head against the wall if it's not necessary?

    0.02
     
  15. QuaziJoe

    QuaziJoe Dolphin Boy

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    dude shutup... don't give him ideas

    Congrats on the sprog.

    Keep her away from dlp if you want her to become a decent person.
     
  16. Torak

    Torak Death Eater

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    Lol DLP has a few decent people;)
     
  17. Immolo

    Immolo High Inquisitor

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    Name one then.
     
  18. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    If that's how you seem to feel about this place, then why are you still here?
     
  19. Grubdubdub

    Grubdubdub Supreme Mugwump

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    I think he means we are not decent by normal moral standarts. We like to rape things, after all.
     
  20. LT2000

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    Lol, don't lump us all together with Vash, please. D:

    That said, I wouldn't let my kid within a mile of this place either, if I had any...
     
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