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Complete The Lie I've Lived by jbern - M

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by jbern, Feb 9, 2007.

  1. Voice of the Nephilim

    Voice of the Nephilim Death Eater DLP Supporter

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    Good news, jbern. I guess that means we get both the staff duels and the Puzzle Room this chapter. Excellent.
     
  2. Khazad-Dumb

    Khazad-Dumb Loves the Gay Porn DLP Supporter

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    Might I suggest a slightly different name? Since you wish to have a similair name, how about The Lie I'm Living? But seriously, you need to come up with a better name. You're first idea and mine are both terrible.
     
  3. Erotic Adventures of S

    Erotic Adventures of S Denarii Host

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    If you make Harry/Fluer a proper couple and keep her around in the next story you could name it "My better half" or something like that and have it refer to either Fluer or to James. A double meaning like "To fight the coming darkness"
     
  4. liansk

    liansk Second Year

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    Maybe you could bend the laws of English a bit and use something like "The Lie I Live" or "The Lie I Embraced"?

    Congrats on the baby, by the way.
     
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  5. QuaziJoe

    QuaziJoe Dolphin Boy

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    Perhaps keep The lie I lived and add on something like Redux, or 2.0

    Something along those lines

    Its hard to suggest titles if you don't know the plot...
     
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  6. Janus

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    How about "Lie Long Enough..." or something along those lines.
     
  7. Jonathan

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    Harry Potter and the Lie I've Lived

    :p sorry I couldn't resist. Really though it's probably best to wait and see how this one ends before thinking up names for the next one.
     
  8. Erotic Adventures of S

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    "The never ending Lie"
     
  9. QuaziJoe

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    No

    There might as well be a young princess and a injun then.

    Fucking hate that series...
     
  10. mjc

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    "Lie Another Day"

    "You only Lie Twice"

    "Live and let Lie"

    "Lie Harder"
     
  11. Perspicacity

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    Lie II: The Wrath of Kwan
     
  12. Erotic Adventures of S

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    YES!

    KKKKKWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!
     
  13. Magus

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    Oh dear lord.

    Jbern, there will be murders if you don't use this.
     
  14. Lucullus

    Lucullus High Inquisitor

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    Oh dear Lord, there WILL be murders if you do use that.

    From what I've remembered, not everyone wants Kwan to play a remotely substantial role in TLIL, and I'm one of these people. Keep Kwan to the TML series.
     
  15. Khazad-Dumb

    Khazad-Dumb Loves the Gay Porn DLP Supporter

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    While "The Wrath of Kwan" would be entertaining and hilarious, it wouldn't really fit with TLIL seeing as he's only cameo'd and many don't wish to see him again. So far the best idea I've seen it "My Better Half".I'd like to second the nomination for this title, if no other worthy contenders show themselves.
     
  16. Dark Belra

    Dark Belra Minister of Magic

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    It finally got updated!

    That was a pretty big chapter!

    Of the whole thing, the Golem was a bit much...
     
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  17. Voice of the Nephilim

    Voice of the Nephilim Death Eater DLP Supporter

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    Great new chapter, jbern.

    Full comments on FF.net, but I can't help but think that Snape is going to use the excuse of acting on Dumbledore's orders to feel out Karkaroff's intentions with regards to Voldemort.
     
  18. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Props if he doesn't though. Personally, I think that too many fics have Snape hide behind Dumbledore. It'd be awesome if Dumbledore had told Snape to stay away from him. Or something like that anyway.

    Anyway, I really liked the chapter, keep up the good work. I like this story better than your other one.
     
  19. pontfirebird73

    pontfirebird73 Third Year

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    Awesome chapter, it was well worth the wait.
     
  20. Immolo

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    I can't wait for next chapter. I still think you should put TML on hitaus for this story. LIL is just that good.
     
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