This story was very good, though it's been a long time since the author updated. I wonder what the pairing will be, I have my fingers crossed for Harry/Fleur.

(Correction) It was updated a few days ago, I have no idea why I never got an Email notification about it. Sorry everyone, my bad! won't happen again.... I hope.

 

Pretty sure it was updated, like, yesterday.

 

It updated yesterday, and before that about 4 days prior, and before that it was published on the 5th (chapter 1 and 2 were uploaded on the same day).

The fic as a whole is 12 days old and has 4 chapters.

You are a moron. You're also pretty retarded for the Harry/Fleur comment. Fleur hasn't been mentioned at all in the story. What could possibly make you think it's Harry/Fleur?

 

Five bucks say this is royalduke under another name. We'll find out when he starts :banana:the fuck out of the :banana:.

*waits for rage by Vash*

 

Eh, new chapter not as great in my opinion... Fudge taking Harry to Azkaban just for a photo-op? Seems pretty flimsy to me, especially given the reaction Mrs. Fudge has to it... like, isn't the minister supposed to be kind of politically savvy? I just didn't really buy it. I kind of hope the whole situation was a cover up for something else--I mean, why did Fudge just appear in the middle of the field all of a sudden? And what were they doing going to Azkaban in the first place? Crossing my fingers here...

 

Intrigued, at the moment.
4/5, eager for more.

 

It was decent enough. A little boring and cliche here and there be very readable 3.5/5

 

I enjoyed it. Barely.

The author seems to subscribe to the "I'll show everything with dialogue." school of thought. There are more " marks than descriptions.

 

Atleas the author didn't try to make Harry and Draco all buddy buddy...

And now Sirius Black is on the loose.

I'll give it a 3/5, just because we are in the beginning of the story.

 

A fic like that already happened. I don't know if it was posted on fanfiction though. I think it was on patronuscharm.net? If I find the link, then I will definately send it to you.

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As far as the story goes, it is a good read. I wouldn't go so far as to call it a GEM just based on the first few chapters but so far, it looks to be decent. Glad he didn't go for the clichés though. 3.5/5 so far...

 

Better yet, did you see the part where she says: "None of us knew he had another, but he was a Death Eater...” Well, I guess that settles her part in the first war pretty crearly.
3.5/5 for me.

 

Saw the idea and almost immediatly did not want to bother with it. Then I thought I was maybe being hasty so I glanced over some of the ratings here. It must be pretty damn good. So, I tried it and NAH! Lucius near Fudge, Harry letting anyone in the house who says they are wizards@ Urg.

But maybe I'll go back when I'm feeling generous... or at least not so friggin tired.

 

Well, this updated, after what -- six years? Meh Chapter, most of it being the cliche wand scene with Ollivander. Still, it's good to see Master Slytherin get back to writing.

 

Huh, Inibaz was a pseudonym? Never got that.

 

Ah. I did like "What Lies Beneath"

I will be giving this a spin.

 

This is a really, really interesting premise. The idea of a pro muggleborn terrorist faction is something that really should be done more often given their horrendous treatment, but it sadly is not the case. Given it's been years since the last update I assume MS abandoned this, but I implore MS to reconsider that decision. 5/5.

 

5/5 for me I love the idea of Fudge adopting Harry and i can't wait to see how Harry will develop as a person so I hope that the author starts updating again.