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Abandoned The Other Side of Hell by Master Slytherin - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Master Slytherin, Aug 1, 2005.

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How much would you rate this fic?

  1. Outstanding

    76.5%
  2. Exceeds Expectations

    14.8%
  3. Acceptable

    5.3%
  4. Poor

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  5. Dreadful

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  1. Hubert

    Hubert First Year

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    Caretaker! :D it would be good to see some originality in fanfiction for once.
     
  2. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    CARETAKER!!! I take it back! I have an opinion again!! MAKE HIM CARETAKER! :D Just not a prick like filch :D Ahhh, fuck it, make him a prick if you want. Caretaker is perfect.


    INDOGHOST IS A GENIUS!!!!!! :D :D :D :D
     
  3. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    lol. I tell you what though, there are too many Harry/Tonks fans out there. One person even said that I just killed her off for no reason. :? Yes, because that makes sense. I've also had one person demand I give it back to Flame so it would be Harry/Tonks. 8)

    There's also been a case of people using different anonymous names to vote. They could've at least re-phrased their sentences!
     
  4. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    *raises hand and feels special* thank you , thank you. i have no idea why their flameing you over tonks. her death made his reslove to kill voldemort stronger.i understood that and i'm a big fan of Harry/Tonks. :?

    :idea: can i suggest one of the many girls harry can be paired with since yours is a harry/many fic. try Rosmerta i've never seen a pairing with her an untaped soure sice she's around his age in this fic around now :idea:
     
  5. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    You are a genius!! I never thought of that!

    'They used to make me laugh' - POA I just remembered!
     
  6. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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  7. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    It's gonna be Harry/None for a long time though. He's going to be a cold, emotionless shell. I've always wanted to read a fic where he is a powerful emotionless guy in the past and now I get my wish 8)

    He's going to be a ... student!

    Teachers are boring, there's nothing to write, they're cliché, why would Dumbledore allow someone he doesn't know, is about 18(in looks), and knows serious Dark Magic to be in charge of a bunch of kids who are in his protection?

    As a student, he'd be less conspicuous, be able to get rid of DE early on and it's easier to write and read. He won't learn a thing, true, but I can pull my own twists much better that way.

    Now a poll which is probably going to be exclusive to DLP.net(depending how far I get into the next chapter):

    Should he be in:

    Hufflepuff or

    Ravenclaw or

    Slytherin?

    Hufflepuff: a shock, a surprise and it will emphasize everyone thinking that he isn't that strong.

    Slytherin: do I really need to go into detail?

    Ravenclaw: a mixture of the 2.
     
  8. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Hufflepuff. The hat wants to put him in Slytherin but Harry convinces it to put him in Hufflepuff.
     
  9. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    He tries to convince it to put him in Hufflepuff definitely. But it would be so much more interesting with him being further ostracized for being thought dark. ON the other hand, its so cliche' , but it does have benefits in terms of conflict, which is why its cliche.



    Tough call. I say Ravenclaw or Slytherin. In the original, the hat considered Ravenclaw saying, "A good mind" or whatever. So I say Ravenclaw or Slytherin. Hufflepuff wasn't even considered.
     
  10. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    if you put him in huffleduff ai shall crush your balls in a vice... thats my favorite threat. heh
     
  11. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    dont give him a house the hat can't put every one in a house there has to be some people who can't be sorted
     
  12. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I've thought about it. In terms of conflict with Dumbledick, Slytherin is best. He also has access to the Chamber of Secrets. (Why hasn't Harry gone back there?! ANd why hasn't he claimed the sword of Gryfinddor anyway?


    If I write a fic, the sword will have special powers, not a lot, but enough. it won't be excalibur or some other crazy shit I've read, :evil:
     
  13. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Harry puts on the hat. 15 minutes later the hat screams Headmaster. Dumbledore is kick out of his office and Harry becomes headmaster.
     
  14. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    LOL.

    That would be a good idea for a hurmor story.

    What would happen if the hat didnt place someone in a house? Would they be kicked out of Hogwarts? I don't think anyone's ever done a story where Harry is just NOT sorted into one of the houses. I've seen a few were he is sorted into all four houses but i dont like them very much.

    Dumbledore would probably just sort Harry into Gryffindor using his Headmaster status.
     
  15. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    does dumbledore even have that power?
     
  16. ulkser

    ulkser Groundskeeper

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    slytherin. this way he can have his way with bellatrix and zabini girl more easily.

    i understand why you want to make him emotionless and therefore no girls at first. however, he could use the girl to get rid of the grief. i mean you can't be sad or grieve over a thing when you are shagging. think about it.

    tonks should've lived and had her way with this remus but waht was done is done.
     
  17. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    I've seen one where Harry's a Founder's Student
     
  18. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Those stories suck. EVERYONE gets sorted.
     
  19. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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  20. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    how cold???
     
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