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Abandoned The Other Side of Hell by Master Slytherin - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Master Slytherin, Aug 1, 2005.

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How much would you rate this fic?

  1. Outstanding

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  2. Exceeds Expectations

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  3. Acceptable

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  1. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Yeah he has the knowledge alright (and he has the power) but not the practical experience. And stories where Harry is some invicible guy from next door are just boring.
     
  2. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Very true.
     
  3. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    ok fine so he'll have to dodgeto take out death eaters (unlike Dumbles who did with one wand wave) But he should be a whole hell of a lot more powerful than Snape and he should be around Dumbledore's less (maybe SLIGHTLY less due to lack of experience)
     
  4. Western_Frontier

    Western_Frontier Second Year

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    I don't care how strong Harry is as long as he is slightly less powerful than Voldemort for most part of the story. If Harry is more powerful than Voldie then make a new character, Voldie's master maybe, who is more powerful than Harry. The point is that Harry's enemy should be more powerful than him until the very end.
     
  5. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Nah don't make something like a Master for Voldemort the guy is too arrogant for something like that.
     
  6. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I agree. Keep harry Slightly weaker than Voldemort.


    UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES ARE YOU TO MAKE VOLDEMORT HAVE A MASTER

    Have a Nice Day


    :D
     
  7. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    Unlkess it is Salazar Slytherin himself the only one Voldemort would even think of taking an order from but damn I can't wait till staurday... hopefully you get it up late friday but I can wait a day and a bit
     
  8. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Liked the new chapter. I wish I had a time turner so I could go straight to Sunday and read the next chapter.
     
  9. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Lol. I just got back so you may see a new chapter soon.
     
  10. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    YES!!! :D :D

    I want BATTLE!!! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
     
  11. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    BATTLE...BATTLE..BATTLE...BATTLE...BATTLE...BATTLE :twisted:
     
  12. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    Pretty much finished the chapter now...just need to verify any errors and add in reviewer responses so mayhaps a half hour wait...
     
  13. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Woohoo.
     
  14. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    *Jepordy music plays*
     
  15. RagefulLlama

    RagefulLlama Seventh Year

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    I'll look forward to it when I get back from my dad's B-day party. So it better be up by then :p :lol:
     
  16. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    refresh...refresh...refresh....

    damn it your making me refresh spam!
     
  17. Master Slytherin

    Master Slytherin Headmaster

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    The Master Slytherin Production would like to present:

    Chapter 8: The Regalsfield Massacre

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2508076/8/

    Read and Review my friends.

    AARGH. It's Saturday!! 1/2 an hour late. :evil:
     
  18. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    An update, woohoo, not bad and don't make an evil Dumbledore and when you do it explain why he is evil or else it's just another boring clichè.
     
  19. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    no don't do it. not only does it rarely ever work but you've allready sort of of messed it up I mean you aren't really being manipulative when you bring a 16 you don't even no to battle Death eaters and voldemort. It could be argued that we was manipulating the boy and testing him but it just didn't seem that way to me.

    but still a nice chapter and hopefully it'll be up by.... tuesday.

    anyway now I have to work abpout getting my answer to Midknights challenge out of my head and on to word and ff.net
     
  20. RagefulLlama

    RagefulLlama Seventh Year

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    I personally prefer manipulative Dumbledore maybe not evil but definately trying to coerce Harry into certain things, and guide him the the path that he want especially now that he has used Dark arts. Either way you choose you MUST (imo) not change it half way through ie. changing him from manipulative bastard to throwing boons and flowers and all that just really angers me :evil: Good chapter though, can't wait for the next one.
     
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