Title: The Power of the Human Will
Author: Shadowheart
Rating: M (R)
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst
Pairing: None (for now...)

Summary: After arriving at his relative's home, Harry decides that he can no longer just react to the actions of Voldemort. He needs to know what exactly is the Dark Lord's plans and decides on a course of action that will affect him profoundly. Will Harry be able to come to terms with the consequences of his actions or will the unthinkable happen and the Wizarding World fall into dark times? (Post OoTP)

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2402613/1/The_Power_of_the_Human_Will

Link: http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=110

 

The beginning of your story is intriguing; for now it's different frrom most IndependentHarry fics (he doesn't suddenly find out that Sirius really meant nothing to him and he has to train if he wants to survive Voldemort and escapes, yada yada yada), but it's too soon to tell.

I would like to see some more (and longer) chaps, before I rate your story and I hope that your grammatical quality will stay the same

 

OI!!!

This is a 1 year and 3 month old post!! This is called Necro-bumping. Don't bump threads!!!

If you have any comments leave it on the thread on which the story is at.

Plus go introduce yourself in the introduction thread and have a look at the rules of the board.

 

Wel, since it was never really commented on, I don't think it's against the rules.

Dark-Syaroan did the same with a James/Lily Fic a few days back, so it should be okay.

 

I apologize. I was not trying to act like a mod. Its just that that thread was over a year old and that there was a story thread that was much more up to date. So I assumed that, since this was pretty much ignored, that this thread was dead.

And I apologize to Moonlight-Shadow-of-Ivy to. In retrospect the wording was a little harsh (anf colorful) for a meaningful post.

 

Googled it, apparently no link.

 

Your google-fu is weak, padawan.

11.000 words, three chapters and apparently abandoned. Here's the link, though.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2402613/1/The_Power_of_the_Human_Will

 

This story had a very promising start. It's post-OotP, and there's an obligatory tear for Sirius in the beginning, but thereafter there's no goblins, will reading, manipulative!Dumbledore, etc. It was refreshing.

Harry disappears from Privet Drive, somehow draining all the magic from his room (his wand, his cloak, etc.), and after five days shows up injured in Hermione's bedroom. No one knows what happened to him, and he thinks he's been on a deserted tropical island.

And that's where it ends. It's a decent mystery, and the story itself is very well-written. I'd say 4/5, but it's hard to justify a short, abandoned story in the library.

3/5 it is.