The latest chapter is surprisingly good. By good, I mean better than before. My rating just went from 3/5 to 3.5/5.

 

I feel like the last chapter wasn't that great. The author isn't that familiar with sex from what I can tell.

 

Huh. Anything more explicit than that smut scene and ff.net moderators remove the story.

Thumbs down to the moderators.

 

I didn't think it was too bad tbh. As said above anything more graphic and the ff. Net mods would remove it.

It will be interesting to see whether Harry tells Daphne about him taking Felix Felicis and how she reacts to it.

 

@PlutoGoU. Yeah. Felix Felicis however lived up to it's reputation. Regular canon would never 'pluck her flower'. So, yeah. Even though the effects lessened as the time went on, the night was pretty much a success in Harry's POV.

 

No, I have no clue where that came from either.

 

I understand that the fight was trying to mimic Harry and Draco's duel in the bathroom. As in, some insults fly and it suddenly escalates rather quickly. Neither Harry nor Draco are famed for their patience and composure.
An example could be their 'duel' in fourth year next to snape's class, where Harry spells Goyle with some harmless crap, as Hermione get's her teeth lengthened.

Now if either of them would use a stronger, potentially dangerous spell, it would escalate. Especially with few witnesses.


So for me, that wasn't completely out of nowhere. But I can't say I expected that.

It is not a very good twist, in any case. But I kinda like the story, though. Still a 3, though.

 

Wow, I just opened it up to the last chapter so far (16) and had to struggle through some sub-par dialogue. My attention span was already wavering towards the end and I was forced to nearly close it when Nott actually threatened Daphne with the dreaded pureblood marriage contract with Draco backing him up. The fight scene - if you can even call it that - was meh and Daphne proved worse in a fight than I'd thought she would. If you're spreading your legs for Harry Potter you better be able to defend yourself from a cutting curse - at least Ginny had some use in a fight.

 

Just updated. The author claims that the story is completed and that the epilogue is pending.

 

What a pointless waste of space this story turned out to be. Ugh. Can't imagine a single possibility for the last chapter(s) to redeem it, short of "rocks fall, everyone dies".

 

I'm assuming that by 'has it finished' he means that he's written all the chapters, but hasn't posted them. This would be an incredibly confusing place to end otherwise.

 

"On a story related note, this story is finished. The final bits are going through the beta process and will be posted when I receive them back."

He certainly made it sound that only a chapter is left before the story is marked complete. What a crappy way to end a story.

2/5.

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It's official DLP'ers. The author replied to my PM on ffn.net. He/She claims that the story is complete and that there is only a chapter before the story ends and I am lost for words.

What a complete waste of space in the Recycling Bin......

 

I don't see how this can be ended in a half decent way in just one more chapter? ?

Oh well it wasn't the worst thing I've ever read. Will give final rating when completed.

 

Wow, my prediction was almost right.

Still trash, though. Seriously, what the fuck.

 

A sequel perhaps..........

 

Well Sesc, there 'The Unforgiving Minute' by VoTN where Harry kills Snape.

 

Well, I PM'ed the author and got the reply.

"No, I don't write sequels to my stories and The Pure Blood Princess' is finished".

Seriously, WTF?