Title: The Rise & Fall of Harry Potter
Author: Lucullus
Rating: T (PG-13)
Genre: Action/Adventure/Angst
Pairing: I have no idea... it hasn't been annouced yet
Summary: No man is born evil. Evil is not inherent, but inculcated. The greatest evil can emerge from the most innocent and purest of soul. Welcome to the life story of a man who failed to quell the growing darkness in himself; the life story of Harry James Potter, The-Boy-Who-Lived, the defeater of Lord Voldemort, and… the greatest Dark Wizard ever since the era of Salazar Slytherin. AU fic.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2390560/1/

 

i'm gonna follow this one..it intrests me

 

I agree this is very interesting

 

Does dabble in the Common Art of Cliché (CAC) but the original idea almost cancels it out.

 

The beginning is probably the most unique I've seen in a Dark!Harry fic. Still, was a little cheesy (Mmmmm. Cheese.) with the whole seizure at the sound of a name thing. Ah, well, has great potential. I suppose at this point it could go a number of ways. We'll just have to wait for more. Till then, we can only speculate.

 

Does anyone know what has happened to the author? He seems to have disappeared....tis a shame for I bookmarked it.

 

You DON'T forget this site. Believe me, I've tried. :mrgreen:

Anyway, I like the story. Been a while since I read it, so I can't remember if it's complete or not. And then the author could have completed it while I was reading elsewhere. But I digress.

 

dark harry

very intersting would like to read a little more about dark harry

 

To be honest I found it to be alittle blaaahh, Don't get me wrong I'm not say it's bad just alittle slow for my taste's. However i will give the writer points for an original idea

 

Original? Yeah...
Cliche? IMO...
Why? Because from the start you can tell that later on in the story Harry is going to turn against his new father because he got tired of being manipulated, IE Dumbledore Syndrome.

 

To start with, this story is five chapters including the original default chapter.

However, it has been abandoned and not updated in over four years. The author sort of spoils important plot points in the original A/N.

The prologue is..interesting, though not focusing on Harry.

The first real chapter starts with Abused!Harry around the age of eight. The author seems to be summing up basically Harry's canon life if it were a bit worse then what Rowling describes. Harry is literally abused for the first half of the chapter.

Harry is then proceeded to be taken in by the Greengrass family, who the character mentions has another son.

The second chapter seems to be focusing more on Greengrass (the father) then Harry and his plans for Harry. The author seems to think his descriptions are part of the character's thoughts at one point.

Of course, Dumbledore is evil supposedly, and is going to try and stop Harry from going with Greengrass. However, as already made obvious by the author, he'll fail. At least the author made Dumbledore sorry for his actions, despite the fact he also treats him like complete crap.

Third chapter, Harry and Greengrass take almost half the chapter to even get into the manor. Then Greengrass makes the eight year old Harry swear a fealty vow to the Greengrass noble line. So now, Harry is a member of the Greengrass family. Then Harry meets the rest of the family.

The fourth and last updated chapter, now Harry is 10. Harry's new "father" somehow knows about the Order of the Phoenix. So much for being a secret organization. Now Harry addresses his "father" as Master as he will be now taught by the Greengrass father figure.

Because that's not child abuse or anything.

Seriously though, four to five miles a day? And training all these hours? Harry!Super soldier much?

Finally, the author makes a good point with the eyewear.

The rest follows the same old cliche storyline. I would of given this story a 3 if it had finished, improved it's grammar, etc. However since it did none of these things, it gets a 2/5 in my book, and my belief that it should be removed from the Library.

 

Updated: 06-11-05 It's not going anywhere....
no rating given, as it needs none.
/neglected fic