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Dead Link The School Years of an Innocent Lad, by:Amsuhl - K+

Discussion in 'Humor' started by Illution, Aug 6, 2008.

  1. Illution

    Illution Seventh Year

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    Title: The School Years of an Innocent Lad
    Author: Amsuhl
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Humor/Parody
    DLP Category: Humor/Parody
    Pairing: None
    Status: Complete, maybe
    Summary:Series of YaWP-verse oneshots. Not a sequel to YaWP, no particular order, probably. Bad humor. Harry is a manipulative git aiming for world domination, but he's got to have fun somewhere. Hogwarts is a decent place for it, he thinks....
    Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4449029/1/The_School_Years_of_an_Innocent_Lad

    It's a small side story for "You're a Wizard, Potter". It's currently a one-shot but might be updated in the future.

    4/5, with the same humor shown in YaWP.



    Checked by Minion, March 4, 2013:
    The link doesn't work anymore. If you know about a place where the story can be found, please inform a mod or an admin.
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Mar 3, 2013
  2. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    Last edited: Aug 6, 2008
  3. Illution

    Illution Seventh Year

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    Fixed. That was strange.
     
  4. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    Found it pretty humorous. Waiting for more.
     
  5. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    I would really like for the author to finsih the longer version of YaWP. It was funny as well as original, but he was living with a relative of McGonagall's who was a child psycologist. It had an actual plot and such, and was shaping up to be a real nice story... but alas, it was never meant to be a real story.

    I'll give this a 4/5. Somewhere in there some words are left out or something, and I had to reread a few lines to figure out exactly what was going on, but it was funny, which is its ultimate purpose.
     
  6. Illution

    Illution Seventh Year

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    I might be mistaken but I think you are not referring to YaWP but to So Sue Me by lunakatrina .
     
  7. Cy Block

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    I properly loved this. It was short and to the point, didn’t muck about with useless exposition. If I ever read “You’re a Wizard Now” I can’t remember any details about that universe. I didn’t need to. This Harry is an obvious cunt and I don’t know if I could stand that character for longer periods. In short doses he’s a delight, however.

    Hermione’s point of view was deftly done and abuse of Snape is funny even if it’s only implied. Evil Harry is evil, but you can’t hate him. He’s just too legen-, wait for it, -dary.
     
  8. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    You're right... I don't know how I got those mixed up.
     
  9. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    I wonder how.

    It's not like they're similar or anything. :rolleyes:
     
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    Sorrows Queen of the Flamingos Moderator

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    Loved this, Harry would be irritating in a full length story but is funny in bite-sized chunks. I wouldn't mind seeing it expanded a little bit though.

    all in all 5/5
     
  11. Pyromaniac

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    New chappy, but not the greatest.
     
  12. Goddessa39

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    Hehehe. I love this so far. Harry a maipulative git is awesome and the bummed but fun Hermione is something that a lot of fics... not to mention cannon... can have more of.
     
  13. Ilverin

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    None of the links seem to work, and a google search seems to indicate that it has been removed.

    Wayback machine might work, but if the author removed it, I'm not going to re-host their work. Either way, this thread needs to be changed.

    P.S.
    Feel free to remove this post once the thread is fixed.
     
  14. Tomster10010

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    A) Why did you necro this? I was kinda hyped that there was something new in the humor section.
    B) Wayback machine doesn't work with FFN
     
  15. Zansa

    Zansa Fourth Year

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    You don't think a story being removed is a good reason to necro a thread? How about you sit back and think for half a second before talking next time?

    I googled this rather extensively and the only links to the story I could find linked back to FF.net, which rather obviously doesn't have the story anymore. I also searched for the other story linked in the OP to a lesser extent, but couldn't find anything there either.
     
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