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Oneshot The Smiling Man by cloneserpents - T

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by The-Hyphenated-One, Jun 4, 2007.

  1. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    It wasnt that bad, but it really wasnt my cuppa. it was a fairly decent story, but IM just not a Harmonian. I dont mind it, at times, but this one wasnt one of those times.

    4 out of 5, though.
     
  2. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Administrator Admin

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    Good, but, you gave me a mental image of Hermione singing.

    4/5
     
  3. ValdTheSpanker

    ValdTheSpanker Squib

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    I'm always all for Draco getting killed off in a humiliating manner and if that involves him getting a pin through the mommy-daddy button, that's just fantastic. The only thing that could've made that one better for me would've been Ginny getting shafted as well. I happen to be in the same opinion as Garrett was; but maybe that's because I hate Ginny so much. Everything about her character makes me want to vomit all over Book 6.

    Good story all around though. 4/5
     
  4. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    4/5 straight up for the slow and fantastic death of Gin Gin! I liked this; it was different to a lot of the fics I usually read so it was new and invigorating. Not a Hermonster fan especially the fact that she fucking sings to a speech deprived Harry? Still it was Humorous and Dark...bra
     
  5. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One

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    Well, this story is kind of included in my review for "Screams," but it also happens to be my favorite of the bunch. HHr is tied for my favorite pair with HL and Honks. And I don't think that either of the other two would work as well in this scenario. It makes sense that they no longer really have a sex drive, and that the bath scene was really just a way of showing their trust and affection for one another.

    And I agree whole-heartedly with the statement that Ginny got off worse than Draco.

    5/5
     
  6. Lord Hoth

    Lord Hoth Squib

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    I thought this was Better than "Screams" but that could be because Ginny was mentally tortured. And Draco getting stabbed it the stones was funny as all hell. Though I pictrued Harry looking kinda like Joker and Hermione as Harley Quinn, is that kinda odd?
     
  7. PapaMidNite56

    PapaMidNite56 Second Year DLP Supporter

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    Another good job by clonesperts


    4/5
     
  8. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    While I was at it, I finished the series and it was certainly...........interesting. 4/5 for the series as a whole.
     
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