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WIP The Star Empire by RahXephon - M/NC-17

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Pasta Sentient, Apr 6, 2011.

  1. joshuafaramir

    joshuafaramir Banned

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    Well, he sure made an ass of himself. Bout time a chick finally screwed this asshole. He really got his ass handed to him this time.

    On the bright side, Harry escaped some serious ass-kicking and learned how to use some of his assets. It's a pretty cool shit to read if you have time to waste. Or a sucker for sci-fi with a little fantasy elements mixed in. Some serious butt-rape in this fic! Maybe we should put that in the tags...

    on a side note, giving this a 4/5 just coz I can.. nah I like how he's not pussyfooting Harry in this fic. He goes for the kill esp. with the latest development.
     
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  2. Caledfwlch

    Caledfwlch Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    The blackmail was in regards to her knowing that nEMP weapons could destroy his magical protections and was willing to reveal this information to the galaxy.
     
  3. FreakLord

    FreakLord Professor DLP Supporter

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    That's something else I don't like in this fic. Defining magic in terms of physics. Feels like a cop out to not make him overly powerful.
     
  4. joshuafaramir

    joshuafaramir Banned

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    Well, it's better than having a power level over 9000 just to shatter his Protego or some shit like that. So generic if you ask me.

    This, on the other hand, limits what Harry can do with his magic. Plus, there's the option of updating his magitech (FFVI) to compensate or maybe null the effects of nEMP.

    It's not like nEMP was developed by muggles so it's not just a deus ex machine.
     
  5. Kang

    Kang Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I do not remember this happening. :S
     
  6. Republic

    Republic The Snow Queen ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    No need to brag, you know.
     
  7. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    erm... it still is available via fanfiction.net. I just checked the link.

    And the next time be aware that posts like that might get you banned.
     
  8. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Ok, then the question isn't as dumb as I thought, but you should have said so in your first post.

    And then there are the rules: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=20438

     
  9. Myduraz

    Myduraz Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    The FFN links works fine, although the other two don't.
     
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    Shoot me a copy as well, if you don't mind? I'm morbidly curious and used to enjoy some of Xephon's other stories.
     
  12. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    There's a rumour going around that there's going to be another FFn purge -- maybe this was one of the first victims?


    Learn to read before you post. The ff.net link is working fine.
    Minion
     
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  13. Timeturn098

    Timeturn098 Squib

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    ((Sorry for necroposting))
    I tried the link to FFN and the story appears to have been removed. However, the author is still posting stories. Wasn't a fan (of the story) but since I did spend the time to locate a copy, it's been copied/archived in "fictionhunt". Though I never read the original, I believe it's a copy of the revised version.
    http://fictionhunt.com/read/8637910/1
     
  14. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    That is a copy of The Star Empire: The Succession of Magic, which the author is unhappy with. I wouldn't be surprised if it disappears from fictionhunt too. It sounds like The Star Hegemony is the current version of the story, but he's removed it from fanfiction.net due to its content.

    "While it is a decent fic, I am not proud of the NSFW elements and therefore decided to remove it from this site."

    That makes it sound as though he might be posting the fic elsewhere where NSFW is accepted, like QQ. If you guys want the latest content, then one of you should PM him and ask about it.
     
  15. Nicovi

    Nicovi Third Year

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    .epub downloads:
    The Star Empire (the original uncensored version) by RahXephon - (Mega, Mediafire)
    The Star Empire - The Revival of Magic & The Succession of Magic (the censored version) by RahXephon - (Mega, Mediafire)

    (Simplified note: the author stopped writing TSE and deleted it. Then censored and continued it under the TRoM/TSoM names).
     
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