Could someone email me the last 3 chapters? Its taking forever for me getting accepted in the Yahoo Group.

My email is im2kool4u@gmail.com

Thanks in advance,
IBG

 

Send me a PM linking to some good twincest porn and you have yourself a deal.

 

Someone sent me chapter 3,4 and 5 but i still need chapter 6!

Thanks a lot to whoever sent those 3, and thanks in advance to anyone sending me chap 6

 

Is that female/female, male/male, or female/male?

 

Male/Male is a no-no. Anything else though is more than welcome...

 

Oh come on someone send me the 6th chap please

 

um.. and i have registered there on the group, it just hasnt been approved yet
Chapter VI: Return of the Stranger

 

Oh sorry, I just saw the link and since I cant follow it assumed that it was a chapter. I've followed this story for ages and its my equal favourite with HP & The Phoenix Wrath

 

You can follow the story without joinging the Yahoo group on his Geosite:

http://www.geocities.com/serpant_sorcerer/promised.html

 

Um Taure. Geocities IS Yahoo, and that is part of his Yahoo Group, you cant see any chaps until your approved into the group.

 

I know Geosites are run by Yahoo, but I was under the impression that they were seperate from Groups.

 

You know, the pic posted with the teaser(/summery) of chapter six, makes me tingle all over.

 

Yeah, the pic is good, but I can just feel that Jono isn't going to deliver. His Harry is too pussyfied at the moment.

 

The picture (from the author's standpoint) is one of the best teasers ever.

So far the story has not met expectations, but I have high expectations for the upcoming chapter.

This is going to be the turning point of the story if it improves at all.


Homer

 

If only Jono had posted his chapters here for us to proof... perhaps, perhaps...

Chapter 6 will determine the awesome-level of "Unholy Land", but I think, that even if the unholy land is lame, the third installment will still be awesome. Because then, Jono won't have to hold back. Harry can go all out on his former-self without lame plot devices to restrain him.

It will be interesting to see how the evil Harry has ravaged Britain.

 

I think that while Harry so far has been a bit of a pansy. Most of it has been because he has just been trying to stay the hell outa the way of everyone. I mean if he came back after a month of being "dead" and started anihilating everything that would probably raise a few red flags for Riddle.

That said I think that Harry's character is going to go back to the way it was at the end of Unholy Land this next chapter.

 

All i hear is people talking about how weak Harry is.
There could be dozens of reason that he is weaker or dumber

The 'Node' might have affected something when he went through.

As for not going to Flamel for help; Harry sees things going on as they happened in his world, which would mean Flamel wouldnt have the stone anymore and would be dead. Plus he already got it wrong once before.

And Harry going in the girls room and watching Katie sleep is a little weird.

And Harry has reason not to trust Headmaster Riddle. 6 years of being hunted can do that. plus he was cuaght lieing right to Harrys' face.

Harry not wanting to get involved in the 'Promised land' war. He just got done fighting one and he still has to fight another.


Harry joined the RA to pass the time when he's not looking for a way home and to offer some help to that world (granted he did teach them anything at all)



Yea he does do dumb things, but its 'Harry' what did you expect.


I really like how serpent sorcercer did the whole phoenix animgus(sp?) the rebirth was quite unexpected
i thought harry was sick becuase of his arm. i mean he's not a healer and all he did was close the wound letting blood build up, and it did seem to be getting worse and worse.


serpent sorcercer keep up the good work. Great story very original (to me anyway)