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Complete The Sun Soul by 50Caliberchaos - M - Pokemon

Discussion in 'Games' started by Dilla, Jan 31, 2010.

  1. Garden

    Garden Supreme Mugwump

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    Liked this new chapter. Just didn't like Ash saving Jesse, 'cause you can tell there are going to be problems cause of that. The Nurse Joy explanation was kinda funny as well.
     
  2. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Update! No action, awesome dramas.
     
  3. MattSilver

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    Update was pretty cool. I liked Janine's character, and James was pretty fucking awesome in the last scene (He totally should've gone through with it, though). Good fic is still good.
     
  4. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    If he had gone through with it, though, saving Jessie couldn't come around and bite Ash in the ass.
     
  5. MattSilver

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    True. I get the feeling it's going to come around and bite him in the ass too.
     
  6. Rhys

    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    I have a feeling that even if it does bite him on the ass, the consequences of not saving Jesse may have been an eventual Game Over 15 Xanatos steps down the line.
     
  7. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Why doesn't Janine suspect her father is acting erratically due to Huntington's disease? It's genetic, and one of its symptoms is dementia, which would explain Koga's behavior.
     
  8. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Maybe the dementia is already affecting her; maybe she's the villian.

    Dun dun duuuun!
     
  9. Seratin

    Seratin Proudmander –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Holy shit. James was ten different flavours of awesome in that scene. I squeed.
     
  10. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    Agreed with everyone above me. I want more. ;_;
     
  11. Innomine

    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    It's updated again, and :D.

    This really is an amazing quality fic, but not saying anything spoilerish.
     
  12. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    How could you spoil it Oz!? How could you?!
     
  14. eetragt

    eetragt Third Year

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    I keep forgetting this story exists, then I find the thread again, and am filled with joy. This makes me so happy.
     
  15. Fiat

    Fiat The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    I have a feeling that the author doesn't pay enough attention to DLP to name it Oz, but one can dream.
     
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  16. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    Oh man, lol. That'd be like my fourth cameo appearance in a fic. :awesome
     
  17. Grubdubdub

    Grubdubdub Supreme Mugwump

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    Very nice chapter. I wonder if in a possible sequel Koga will be in the Elite Four... seems kind of hard to write it in, but it would be very interesting.
     
  18. Sin Saiori

    Sin Saiori Death Eater

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    I'm on the fence here; While Janine was completely balls-to-the-wall awesome, Koga was quite a sympathetic figure.

    /Whatever

    I <3 Haunter!
     
  19. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Munchlax should have been Ash's. It isn't water-type. Or rock. Ash with a Snorlax would pwn.

    Besides, didn't a snorlax kill Misty's parents?
     
  20. Garden

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    The fic addresses the fact that MIsty's parents were killed by a Snorlax
    It's kind of a healing thing for Misty, as she's taking in a creature whose species killed her parents.
     
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