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Complete The Sun Soul by 50Caliberchaos - M - Pokemon

Discussion in 'Games' started by Dilla, Jan 31, 2010.

  1. Moloch

    Moloch Groundskeeper

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    Oh. Sup Oz.
     
  2. MattSilver

    MattSilver The Traveller

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    One's dreams...

    Occasionally fucking come true.

    :awesome Great update, if a bit short. But still, compared to some other fanfiction update rates I've seen in my time, Sun Soul's got a fantastic one. Keep up the good work 50cal.
     
    Last edited: Sep 21, 2010
  3. Fiat

    Fiat The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Oh. My. Nyarlathotep.

    Holy. Fucking. Yog-Sothoth.

    Unholy. Mother. Of 1000 Young.

    There are no words. NO WORDS!

    50Cal, I would like to thank you on behalf of DLP for catering to your faithful readers.
     
  4. Sin Saiori

    Sin Saiori Death Eater

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    All Hail 50! All Hail 50!

    I don't want to be here when this reaches Oz. The reaction will be extreme.
     
  5. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    The shout out was awesome, but more interesting to me is the political situation of monarchy in Kanto.
     
  6. Innomine

    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    lol @ Oz.

    But, overall it was a good chapter. Interesting argument between Misty and Brock, I kinda agreed with Brock, but Misty's argument was interesting too.
     
  7. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    To 50Caliber: :awesome <--click for IMAX experience

    Inb4OZfaps
     
    Last edited: Sep 22, 2010
  8. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I was dancing topless in a foam party when Seratin told me. :awesome
     
  9. 50caliberchaos

    50caliberchaos Squib

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    All evidence from family, friends, and employers to the contrary aside, let it never be said that I'm a completely heartless jerk.
    Also,
    Pics or it didn't happen :cheers:
     
  10. Seratin

    Seratin Proudmander –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Let it be known that I did not aproach him while at a party and talk to him about his inclusion in a pokemon fanfic. I texted him. That's not gay at all.


    Can of worms. He's nearly a bigger camwhore than Taure. ;)
     
  11. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I'm afraid there are no pics. :(

    I do have a video of my friend climbing a building on campus after 4 hours of heavy drinking though!
     
  12. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    We've got another update.
     
  13. Xantam

    Xantam Denarii Host

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    Not a whole lot of action in this one, but the plot progresses. Also, the author has a new Harry Potter fic up. Haven't looked at it yet, but I will definitely be trying it out.
     
  14. Juggler

    Juggler Death Eater DLP Supporter

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    Eh, the new story runs over old ground, but the writing is at least fresh.

    In the latest chapter and the first two chapters of his Harry Potter fic, I count the word 'portal' at least 3 times, used as a synonym for door. It broke the train of thought each time.

    I liked this chapter. Good amount of exposition by Erika, mixed in with a bit more Ghost Recon-esque stealth missions. Didn't much like the last section, but that's probably because it didn't center around Ash.
     
  15. b0b3rt

    b0b3rt Backtraced

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    Son of a bitch - I really don't like author's
    killing of main characters
    , especially in a semi-focused romance. But I hate deus ex machina intervention even more, so I guess there's not much for it.
     
  16. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I for one am glad that 50cc isn't afraid to take his story where he wants. Sweet update man.

    EDIT: Just occurred to me...


    I ended up randomly finding a pic the other day. Not safe for sanity. <.<

    And what's gonna happen to Oz? :(
     
    Last edited: Nov 1, 2010
  17. Garden

    Garden Supreme Mugwump

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    Awesome battle. What happened to the Snorlax, though?
     
  18. b0b3rt

    b0b3rt Backtraced

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    Probably hasn't evolved from the Munchlax (unless I've missed something somewhere).
     
  19. pdo91

    pdo91 Professor DLP Supporter

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    I've always thought of an authors ability to kill off characters properly as a mark of quality. It might not be everyone's favorite thing (or even mine), but I still think it was excellent, and I'm definitely looking forward to the next update.

    50caliberchaos continues to amaze.
     
  20. Hashasheen

    Hashasheen Half-Blood Prince

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    Didn't see that coming. :eek:
     
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