Err... I beleive she's a muggle. BUT crucio just COULD wake up something inside her, like some... super squib power or vampiric traits or dormant veela blood or... pfff. It's just lame to have completely muggle girl around Harry while he has to go all over the place, kicking DE's arses.

 

No need to be sorry. It's your story after all.I just can't wait to read it.

 

Super!Harry would suck, but crucio would definetly work on her, i just wish updates would be more frequent..

 

Hey, how about, for the clothing thingy, you could have Cathy for the Muggle stuff, but when Harry goes to buy Wizard stuff, he finds this shop that has a thing that analyzes his personality and makes a woredrobe to match? That would be cool, IMO.

 

S'alright. Basically, Harry walks into the wizarding clothes store that isn't MM. Owner says that he/she has something new that he/she wants to try out. Harry asks what it is. Owner explains, saying that it is a clothing to personality matcher. What it is is a little orb thingy that does simple legimency on the customer, examining their personality. It then prints out a little sheet that has the clothes that would perfectly match the person that was scanned. Thats the gist of it. If it still makes no sense, its because Im tired.

 

Will you keep the original version? I don't know, by revising what you listed.. it seems like it will be a completely different story! It would probably be a story that would stand out more and be better, but it wouldn't be the same ToM! (but yeah... maybe that's the point.)

^ I rather like ip82's idea, though.

 

Yes, ip82's idea is very good and original. It'll probably start a cilche or something.

 

i don't know what i was saying either to be honest, i forgot, i do look forward to anything new though..

 

Sree you've been revising this story for...months! but anyway whats the expected launch date for this new fic you have planned?